机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但可以增加更多具体细节和连接词，使表达更连贯丰富。

範例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. For instance, it allows me to focus more on my studies and work without worrying about doing laundry. Moreover, it is very convenient and makes my daily routine much easier.

建議: 回答内容较好，但语言表达有些重复，且细节不够具体，建议使用更多连接词和具体例子。

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily life. They save a lot of time and effort, which is especially helpful for busy people or the elderly. For example, using a washing machine means you don't have to spend hours washing clothes by hand, which makes household chores much easier.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议注意语法准确性，使用完整句子，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: It depends. If the machine is expensive or has many buttons, I usually read the instructions before using it to avoid harming myself or damaging the machine. However, if the machine looks simple, I tend to try using it without reading the manual.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和主谓一致，并丰富内容。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. If a machine is expensive and has many buttons, people should read the instructions before using it. This helps to avoid harm to themselves and prevents damage to the machine.

× Thanks to it, I can focus more on my studies and work without worrying about doing laundering.

✓ Thanks to it, I can focus more on my studies and work without worrying about doing laundry.

laundering 是动名词形式，但在这里应使用不可数名词 laundry 表示洗衣服的活动。laundering 通常不用于日常表达中。

× They not only save a lot of time and efforts but also make household much easier, especially for busy people or the elderly.

✓ They not only save a lot of time and effort but also make household chores much easier, especially for busy people or the elderly.

efforts 应为 effort，因这里指不可数的“努力”或“时间”，且 household 后应加名词 chores 表示家务，使句子完整且语义明确。

× if the machine is expensive or has a lot of button, I will read the instructions before using it to avoid the harm for myself and damaging the machine.

✓ if the machine is expensive or has a lot of buttons, I will read the instructions before using it to avoid harm to myself and damaging the machine.

button 应为复数 buttons，因为有很多按钮；同时 avoid 后不加定冠词 the，且 harm 后应接介词 to 表示“避免伤害”。

× But if the machine look simple I will try to it.

✓ But if the machine looks simple, I will try it.

machine 是单数，动词应用第三人称单数形式 looks；try 后不需要介词 to，直接加宾语 it。

× But if the machine look simple I will try to it.

✓ But if the machine looks simple, I will try it.

主语 machine 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 look 应加 -s 变为 looks。

× If an machine is expensive, I'll have a lot of buttons.

✓ If a machine is expensive, it will have a lot of buttons.

an 用于以元音音素开头的单词前，machine 以辅音音素开头，应使用 a；此外，句子主语应是 machine，谓语用 it will have 更合适。

× If an machine is expensive, I'll have a lot of buttons.

✓ If a machine is expensive, it will have a lot of buttons.

这里的主语是 machine，后面不能用第一人称代词 I，应该用第三人称代词 it。

× People should read the instructions before they use it.

✓ People should read the instructions before they use the machine.

it 指代不明确，前文提到的机器应明确指出，避免歧义。

× It it avoid harm for themselves and damage the machine.

✓ It avoids harm to themselves and damage to the machine.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，且 avoid 后应接介词 to，且 it 应为第三人称单数动词 avoids。