机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在词汇错误（wrapping robots 应为 sweeping robots），表达不够自然且有语法错误。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并避免重复。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the sweeping robot. It helps me clean the floor automatically, so I don't have to do it myself.

建議: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误和用词不当（如"with the saving time"），建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time. This allows me to focus on other hobbies, which makes me very happy.

建議: 回答内容完整，但表达稍显重复和不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and avoid damaging it.

建議: 回答未完成且表达不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连贯的连接词。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because many machines use electricity, and reading the instructions helps us use them safely and avoid accidents.

× In my home, my favorite machine is wrapping robots.

✓ In my home, my favorite machines are wrapping robots.

这里主语是复数形式的wrapping robots，但谓语用的是单数形式的machine，主谓不一致。应将machine改为复数machines以匹配wrapping robots。

× You know the swapping robots can help me to swap the house and I can just press the button and don't need to clean by myself.

✓ You know the sweeping robots can help me to sweep the house and I can just press the button and don't need to clean by myself.

原句中'swapping'应为'sweeping'，表示扫地机器人。swap意为交换，不符合语境。

× You know the swapping robots can help me to swap the house and I can just press the button and don't need to clean by myself.

✓ You know the sweeping robots can help me to sweep the house and I can just press the button and don't need to clean by myself.

动词clean后面不需要加介词by，且表达应为clean by myself改为clean it myself更自然。

× I can use this machine to help me to do some housework and with the saving time I can do other things I'm interested in that's made me feel over the moon.

✓ I can use this machine to help me do some housework and with the saved time I can do other things I'm interested in that make me feel over the moon.

help后面不需要to，saving time应改为saved time表示节省的时间，且关系从句中动词应为make而非made。

× Before controlling a machine, I will read the instructions at first because I am afraid I don't know how to use the machine and I can protect the machine after using it according to instructions.

✓ Before operating a machine, I will read the instructions first because I am afraid I don't know how to use the machine and I can protect the machine after using it according to the instructions.

control a machine不太合适，改为operate更自然；at first应改为first；instructions前应加定冠词the。

× You know, the devices are connected with electricity, so before using the machine, it is crucial for us to read the instruction to protect ourselves and.

✓ You know, the devices are connected to electricity, so before using the machine, it is crucial for us to read the instructions to protect ourselves.

connected后应接to electricity而非with electricity；instruction应为复数instructions；句尾and后无内容，应去掉。