机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I can use it to play games, browse websites, and watch movies.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误，建议直接回答问题并用具体细节支持观点。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce the effort needed for household chores.

建議: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，建议明确表达是否阅读说明书，并说明原因。

範例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine, but if I encounter problems, I will check the manual for help.

建議: 回答不完整且缺乏内容，建议完整表达观点并给出理由。

範例: I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps me use the machine correctly and avoid mistakes.

× The machine maybe I really like my computer and I can do a lot of thing by by it.

✓ The machine maybe I really like my computer and I can do a lot of things by it.

这里的 'thing' 应该用复数形式 'things'，因为表示很多事情。单复数错误。

× and it also help I can watch movies on it.

✓ and it also helps me watch movies on it.

动词 'help' 需要第三人称单数形式 'helps'，且后面接动词时不需要 'can'，直接用动词原形。

× Oh definitely yes, it helps people to to reduce.

✓ Oh definitely yes, it helps people to reduce.

重复了 'to'，应删除多余的一个。

× Reduce the work the work people maybe don't need to wash clothes and swimming floor.

✓ Reduce the work; people maybe don't need to wash clothes and sweep the floor.

'swimming floor' 应为 'sweep the floor'，这里是词汇错误，且句子结构不完整。

× No, I don't raise it before you see it.

✓ No, I don't read it before I use it.

'raise' 用错，应为 'read'，且 'before you see it' 不合逻辑，应为 'before I use it'。

× This machine, I often use it by Malcolm when I meet some difficulties.

✓ This machine, I often use it by myself when I meet some difficulties.

'Malcolm' 应为 'myself'，反身代词使用错误。

× Maybe I will. I will read this into instructions.

✓ Maybe I will. I will read the instructions.

'into instructions' 应为 'the instructions'，介词使用错误。

× Or maybe no. As I mentioned before, I.

✓ Or maybe not. As I mentioned before, I don't think it's very important.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清楚。