机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
In my home I really like the washing machine because it gives people freedom, like you don't have to wash clothes by yourself and it save a lot of time for a family.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yeah, definitely. Like because if you live in a big house, it would take a lot of your time to clean the floor, to clean the household clothes. So this kind of machine really bring convenience to people.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
I seldom read instructions for machine because every household machine is quite common and if I don't know how to use it, I would turn to my parents and let them teach me how to use it. It would be too complex to read instructions myself.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yeah, to some extent. If you are using a complex machine that I rarely seen in daily life, it would be helpful to read instruction beforehand and because it can save you a lot of time to figure it out how it works.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如“it save”应为“it saves”，并且可以增加更多具体细节来丰富内容，使回答更自然流畅。
範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. For example, it allows me to do other tasks while my clothes are being cleaned, which is very convenient for a busy family like mine.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中应避免口语化词汇如“like”，并注意主谓一致，如“bring”应为“brings”。同时，增加连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save a lot of time. For instance, in a big house, cleaning floors and clothes manually would be very time-consuming, so these machines bring great convenience.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“instructions for machine”应为“instructions for machines”，并且可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: I seldom read instructions for machines because most household machines are quite common. If I don't know how to use one, I usually ask my parents to teach me, as reading complex instructions can be time-consuming.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中应注意时态和语法，如“seen”应为“see”，“instruction”应为“instructions”，并且避免重复表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: Yes, to some extent, I think it is important to read instructions, especially when using a complex machine that I rarely see in daily life. Reading instructions beforehand can save a lot of time in figuring out how it works.
文法
× it save a lot of time for a family.
✓ it saves a lot of time for a family.
主语是单数第三人称"it"，谓语动词应加-s，表示第三人称单数形式。
× this kind of machine really bring convenience to people.
✓ this kind of machine really brings convenience to people.
主语"this kind of machine"是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"brings"。
× I seldom read instructions for machine because every household machine is quite common
✓ I seldom read instructions for machines because every household machine is quite common
"instructions for machine"中"machine"应为复数形式"machines"，因为指的是多种机器的说明书。
× If you are using a complex machine that I rarely seen in daily life, it would be helpful to read instruction beforehand
✓ If you are using a complex machine that I rarely see in daily life, it would be helpful to read instructions beforehand
"I rarely seen"中"seen"是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时"see"，因为描述的是习惯或常态。
× If you are using a complex machine that I rarely seen in daily life, it would be helpful to read instruction beforehand
✓ If you are using a complex machine that I rarely see in daily life, it would be helpful to read instructions beforehand
"read instruction"中"instruction"应为复数形式"instructions"，表示多条说明。
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