机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答内容较为简单，句子结构重复，缺少连贯的连接词，且表达略显机械。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富词汇和句式，避免重复。

範例: My favourite machine at home is definitely my laptop because it allows me to perform various activities. For instance, I can read articles to stay informed, watch movies for entertainment, and even play video games to relax.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because I dislike doing housework. Therefore, having these machines helps me save time and effort in cleaning and laundry.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议明确表达是否阅读说明书，使用完整句子，并解释原因，避免语法错误。

範例: To be honest, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because I want to understand all its functions and use it properly.

建議: 回答中有词汇使用错误（raise应为read），句子结构单一。建议注意词汇准确性，丰富句式，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I think it is very important to read the instructions because they help me understand all the functions and teach me how to use the equipment correctly.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very, very important for me because I I'm a person who don't like doing housework and I feel it will kill myself that I sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every every day.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very, very important for me because I am a person who doesn't like doing housework and I feel it will kill me to sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every day.

这里“washing machine”和“sweeping machine”应使用复数形式，因为指的是两种机器的总称。动词“don't”应改为“doesn't”，因为主语是第三人称单数“person”。“kill myself”表达不当，应改为“kill me”，表示“让我感到非常累”。此外，“I I'm”重复，应改为“I am”。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very, very important for me because I I'm a person who don't like doing housework and I feel it will kill myself that I sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every every day.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very, very important for me because I am a person who doesn't like doing housework and I feel it will kill me to sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every day.

主语是第三人称单数“person”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“doesn't”，而不是“don't”。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are very, very important for me because I I'm a person who don't like doing housework and I feel it will kill myself that I sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every every day.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very, very important for me because I am a person who doesn't like doing housework and I feel it will kill me to sweep the floor every day and do the laundry every day.

“kill myself”用法错误，应该用“kill me”，因为这里是表达“让我感到非常累”，而不是反身动作。

× To be honest, I I did read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make a good bargain for its.

✓ To be honest, I did read the instructions before using a machine because I wanted to make a good bargain for it.

前半句使用了过去时“did read”，后半句“want”应与之时态一致，改为过去时“wanted”。“its”用法错误，应为“it”。

× To be honest, I I did read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make a good bargain for its.

✓ To be honest, I did read the instructions before using a machine because I wanted to make a good bargain for it.

“its”是物主代词，表示“它的”，此处应使用宾格代词“it”指代“machine”。

× All functions that I probably use need to.

✓ I need to understand all the functions that I probably use.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句子不通顺。应补充完整句子，使表达清晰。

× I think it is very important to raise those instructions because through the instructions I can get all the functions and I can know how to use the equipment well.

✓ I think it is very important to read those instructions because through the instructions I can learn all the functions and know how to use the equipment well.

“raise those instructions”用法错误，应为“read those instructions”，表示“阅读说明书”。

× I think it is very important to raise those instructions because through the instructions I can get all the functions and I can know how to use the equipment well.

✓ I think it is very important to read those instructions because through the instructions I can get all the functions and know how to use the equipment well.

“I can know”表达不自然，通常用“know”不加“can”，或者用“learn”。此处可简化为“know”。