机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'in the day' and capitalize words properly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why it's convenient.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me time and effort. Instead of washing clothes by hand, I can simply load them into the machine, which makes laundry much more convenient.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Avoid filler words like 'Wow' and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific examples.

範例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential in daily life. For instance, my friend’s family is large, so they use three washing machines to handle all their laundry efficiently.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Instead of 'watch it', say 'read the instructions'. Also, use linking words to explain why reading instructions is important. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it safely and effectively.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs grammatical correction and clearer structure. Use the correct verb form 'I often read' and avoid awkward phrasing like 'help me to guide'. Instead, say 'help me understand how to use it safely and effectively'.

範例: Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to use it safely and effectively.

× I prefer washing machine because it help me to wash The Dirty clothes in the day and I also don't need to use my hand to wash those clothes, it's more convenient for me.

✓ I prefer the washing machine because it helps me to wash the dirty clothes during the day and I also don't need to use my hands to wash those clothes; it's more convenient for me.

The subject 'washing machine' is singular and requires the verb 'helps' in third person singular form. 'The Dirty' should be 'the dirty' as adjectives are not capitalized unless proper nouns. 'Hand' should be plural 'hands' because we usually use both hands for washing. Also, 'in the day' is better expressed as 'during the day'. Adding 'the' before 'washing machine' is necessary because it refers to a specific machine in the home.

× Wow. Personally, I think it's essential for the daily life in every household. For example, my friend's house, he needs three machines to wash their dirty clothes. The reason is because there are a lot of people they live in in his house and so that he need more.

✓ Wow. Personally, I think it's essential for daily life in every household. For example, at my friend's house, he needs three machines to wash their dirty clothes. The reason is that there are a lot of people living in his house, so he needs more.

The phrase 'he need' should be 'he needs' to agree with the singular subject 'he'. 'They live in in his house' is incorrect; it should be 'living in his house' to correctly describe the people residing there. 'The reason is because' is redundant; 'The reason is that' is preferred. Also, 'for the daily life' should be 'for daily life' as 'daily life' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'.

× Well, I think we probably need to watch it as it's important that instruct us how to use it and so that we can use more effectively.

✓ Well, I think we probably need to watch it as it's important that it instructs us how to use it so that we can use it more effectively.

The modal verb 'need to' is correctly used but the sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'instructs'. The verb 'instruct' should be in third person singular 'instructs' to agree with 'it' (the instructions). Also, 'use more effectively' should be 'use it more effectively' to clarify the object of 'use'. The phrase 'and so that' is redundant; 'so that' alone suffices.

× I often reading the instructions before using it because they help me to guide how do I use safely and how do I use it effectively.

✓ I often read the instructions before using it because they help guide me on how to use it safely and how to use it effectively.

The phrase 'I often reading' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I often read' because 'often' is an adverb of frequency and should be followed by the base verb. 'Help me to guide' is awkward; 'help guide me' is more natural. The questions 'how do I use safely' and 'how do I use it effectively' should be statements: 'how to use it safely' and 'how to use it effectively'.