机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言较为自然，但存在重复和语法错误，且句子结构不够紧凑。建议避免重复词汇，使用更准确的表达，并且增加连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time. Previously, I had to wash all the dishes by hand after dinner, which was tiring. However, now I can simply load the dishwasher and relax while it does the work.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和语法，丰富细节，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. In the past, people had to wash clothes and clean floors manually, which was exhausting. Nowadays, these machines make household chores much easier and more efficient.

建議: 回答表达不够准确，存在语法错误，且逻辑不够清晰。建议改进句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并且说明具体原因。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because many of them are complex. Reading the manual helps me understand how to operate the device properly and avoid damaging it.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且内容重复。建议简化表达，避免重复，并用更清晰的语言说明原因。

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because advanced machines can be complicated. By reading carefully, we can use them correctly and prevent any damage.

× For example, in the past we don't have a washing machines or sweeping machines.

✓ For example, in the past we didn't have washing machines or sweeping machines.

这里的 'washing machines' 和 'sweeping machines' 是复数形式，但前面的助动词 'don't' 用于复数现在时，句子描述的是过去的情况，应该用过去时 'didn't'，且 'washing machines' 和 'sweeping machines' 不需要加冠词 'a'。

× That means our families must to do them by themselves.

✓ That means our families must do them by themselves.

情态动词 'must' 后面直接接动词原形，不能加 'to'。这里错误地使用了 'must to do'，正确用法是 'must do'。

× But all of us are tired, so nobody want to do that then after this.

✓ But all of us are tired, so nobody wants to do that then after this.

主语 'nobody' 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'wants'，而不是 'want'。

× So if we don't read the instruction, it's easy to break them.

✓ So if we don't read the instructions, it's easy to break them.

这里 'instructions' 是复数，表示说明书的内容，不能用单数 'instruction'，应使用复数形式 'instructions'。

× Yes, I think it is very important and essential for us to read the instructions before using a machine because they are high technology, which means we don't use them in our daily life.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important and essential for us to read the instructions before using a machine because they are high-tech, which means we don't use them in our daily life.

'high technology' 用作形容词时应为 'high-tech'，表示高科技的意思。

× So it is important for us to read the instructions carefully that we don't break them.

✓ So it is important for us to read the instructions carefully so that we don't break them.

句子中 'that' 用法不当，应使用连词 'so that' 表示目的。