机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 문장이 끊어져 있어 의사 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 자연스러운 연결어를 사용하여 답변을 명확하고 유창하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the TV because I love watching dramas and movies. I have a big 44-inch TV, so it feels like I'm in a cinema when I watch shows at home.

建議: 답변이 혼란스럽고 논리적이지 않으며, 문법 오류가 많습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하며, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I think washing machines are important because they help clean clothes quickly. However, sweeping machines are less necessary since we can clean floors manually without much trouble.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 행동과 이유를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to understand how to operate it correctly and avoid mistakes.

建議: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 몇몇 단어 선택과 문장 구조가 부자연스럽습니다. 단어 선택에 주의하고 문장을 더 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it safely and efficiently. For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, reading the manual prevents mistakes and saves time.

× My favorite machine at home is the. TV.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the TV.

The article 'the' should be directly followed by the noun without a period in between. The period after 'the' is incorrect and breaks the sentence structure.

× Because I love watching drama in movies or in my home, I have the big. 44 inch TV so.

✓ Because I love watching dramas and movies at home, I have a big 44-inch TV.

The sentence is fragmented and has misplaced periods. 'Drama' should be pluralized to 'dramas' to match the context. Also, 'in movies or in my home' is awkward; 'dramas and movies at home' is clearer. The article 'a' is needed before 'big 44-inch TV.'

× so. I actually slow. In cinema like. Feels.

✓ So, I actually feel like I am in a cinema.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Slow' is incorrect here; likely intended 'feel.' The phrase 'in cinema like feels' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

No correction needed here; the plural forms are used correctly.

× Actually, I don't think it is important because the washing machine is important, but sweeping machine is not important because the washing machine is very useful and.

✓ Actually, I don't think it is important because the washing machine is important, but the sweeping machine is not important because the washing machine is very useful.

The phrase 'sweeping machine is not important' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'sweeping machine.' Articles are necessary for singular countable nouns.

× Oh, for needed to wash the dish, but sweeping machine is not.

✓ Oh, it is needed to wash the dishes, but the sweeping machine is not.

The phrase 'for needed to wash the dish' is ungrammatical. It should be 'it is needed to wash the dishes.' Also, 'dish' should be plural 'dishes.' The article 'the' is needed before 'sweeping machine.'

× We have used.

✓ We have used it.

The sentence is incomplete. 'Used' is a past participle and requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× Yes, I read the instruction before using a machine because I don't.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine because I don't.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the guidelines for using a machine.

× I I can I can instructor the machine, so it is important to me to read and make it make. Usually.

✓ I cannot operate the machine, so it is important for me to read the instructions carefully.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and incorrect word usage ('instructor' instead of 'operate'). The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I always read instruction before. Using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and efficiently.

✓ Yes, I always read instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and efficiently.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to guidelines.

× For example, when I use the new kitchen appuleius or reading the menu prevents mistakes in save times.

✓ For example, when I use the new kitchen appliances, reading the manual prevents mistakes and saves time.

'Appuleius' is a misspelling of 'appliances.' 'Reading the menu' is incorrect; it should be 'reading the manual.' 'In save times' is incorrect; it should be 'saves time.' The prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity.

× Therefore, I think it is very important to follow the instructions carefully.

✓ Therefore, I think it is very important to follow the instructions carefully.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.