机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha açık ve anlaşılır ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırmalı ve gereksiz tekrarları önlemelisiniz. Ayrıca, makinenin ne işe yaradığını ve neden favoriniz olduğunu açıklayan daha spesifik detaylar eklemelisiniz.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my robotic vacuum cleaner. I bought it last year, and it helps me keep the floors clean automatically. It has different settings for various floor types, which makes cleaning very efficient.

建議: Cevabınızda net ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp, neden önemli olduklarını açıklayan destekleyici detaylar eklemelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizin akıcı ve anlamlı olması için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important household appliances. They save a lot of time and effort by automating cleaning tasks. For example, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines keep the floors tidy.

建議: Cümlenizi daha düzgün ve akıcı hale getirmek için dilbilgisi kurallarına dikkat etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, neden talimatları okuduğunuzu daha açık ve detaylı bir şekilde açıklamalısınız. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi genişletebilirsiniz.

範例: Usually, I read the instructions before using a machine because each device has different settings. Reading the manual helps me understand how to operate it safely and effectively.

建議: Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, talimatları okumanın neden önemli olduğunu daha spesifik örneklerle açıklamalısınız. Cümlelerinizi daha düzgün ve anlamlı hale getirmek için dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat edin.

範例: Absolutely, I believe reading instructions is a crucial first step when using any machine. Since each device has different settings, understanding them ensures proper setup and prevents damage.

× In my home, my favorite machine is Robot for complainers.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is the Robot for Complainers.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Robot for Complainers' because it refers to a specific machine with a name. Without 'the', the sentence sounds incomplete or incorrect.

× And it's the name for me.

✓ And that's the name I gave it.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The correction clarifies that the speaker named the machine, improving sentence structure and meaning.

× I purchased it in. Generi it's it has a settings in the it's related.

✓ I purchased it in Generi. It has settings related to its functions.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence with proper structure and meaning.

× Washing machines and sweeping machines are. Could you show for the household things?

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are useful household appliances.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence that answers the question appropriately.

× It. Every home has a. Church chars an Indiana washing clouds and.

✓ Every home has them, such as washing machines and vacuum cleaners.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical words. The correction provides a coherent sentence with relevant vocabulary.

× Usually yes, becauses each machines have has different type of instructions and settings we have to look at.

✓ Usually yes, because each machine has a different type of instructions and settings we have to look at.

'Each' requires singular noun 'machine' and singular verb 'has'. Also, 'because' was misspelled. The definite article 'a' is needed before 'different type'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× This this instructions and follow up this directions to keep.

✓ These instructions and directions must be followed carefully.

'Instructions' and 'directions' are plural, so 'these' should be used instead of 'this'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Reading instructions. Is. Crucial step for the beginning of the machines.

✓ Reading instructions is a crucial step before using machines.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. The correction forms a complete, clear sentence with proper article usage and word order.

× Each machine has different type of settings setups.

✓ Each machine has a different type of settings and setups.

The singular noun phrase 'a different type' requires the article 'a'. Also, 'settings setups' is unclear, so 'settings and setups' is used for clarity.

× And we have to set up first.

✓ And we have to set them up first.

The original sentence lacks an object for 'set up'. Adding 'them' clarifies what needs to be set up, improving sentence structure.