机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, explain why the blender is handy and how you use it.

範例: My favourite machine at home is a small blender that I recently bought. It's very handy because I can carry it anywhere I want, and it has a timer function which makes it easy to use. I often use it to make smoothies quickly, which saves me time in the morning.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid incomplete or unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they help keep the home clean and save a lot of time. In the past, people cleaned manually, which took much longer. Nowadays, these machines make household chores easier and more efficient.

建議: Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer more natural and clear. Explain the reasons why reading instructions is helpful with specific details.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because they guide me on how to use it properly. This helps me avoid mistakes and makes the machine easier to operate. Also, reading instructions can prevent damage to the machine or accidents.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using smoother linking words and more natural phrasing. Provide specific examples of possible problems if instructions are ignored.

範例: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine. This helps you avoid accidents or damage that could happen if you don't follow the guidelines properly. For example, not reading instructions might cause you to misuse the machine and break it.

× I recently bought a. Blending machine it's from new triple LED an it is one of my favorite machine because it's very handy an I can't carry wherever whenever I want, even its own timing. Small blender so it's.

✓ I recently bought a blending machine. It's from New Triple LED and it is one of my favourite machines because it's very handy and I can carry it wherever and whenever I want, even its own timing. Small blender so it's.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'one of my favourite'. Also, 'can't' should be 'can' to express ability. The sentence was fragmented and needed punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, definitely at. I think washing machines and should be machines are very essential in our daily life because making a home clean, it takes a lot of time and using those machines it will save our time.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very essential in our daily life because making a home clean takes a lot of time and using those machines will save our time.

The phrase 'should be machines' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'it takes' should be 'takes' without 'it' as the subject is 'making a home clean'.

× But when I think about the past time. It wasn't that important, but recently everyone RV's.

✓ But when I think about the past, it wasn't that important, but recently everyone uses them.

The phrase 'everyone RV's' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be 'everyone uses them' to refer to machines. Also, 'past time' should be 'the past'.

× Yes definitely I do read an instruction before I use any kind of machines because it helps you to guide how you gonna use that machines.

✓ Yes, definitely I do read instructions before I use any kind of machine because it helps guide how you are going to use that machine.

'An instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to general guidance. 'Machines' should be singular 'machine' to match 'any kind of'. 'Gonna' is informal and should be 'are going to'.

× It gives you a proper instruction so that you can use it more easily and the another reason is if you gonna read.

✓ It gives you proper instructions so that you can use it more easily, and another reason is if you are going to read them.

'A proper instruction' should be plural 'proper instructions'. 'The another reason' is incorrect; it should be 'another reason'. 'You gonna' should be 'you are going to'. 'Read' needs an object 'them' referring to instructions.

× Yes, I do think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machines. It will help you too. Be aware from the disaster that you could make if you don't. Read or if you don't follow any instructions.

✓ Yes, I do think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machines. It will help you to be aware of the disasters that you could cause if you don't read or if you don't follow any instructions.

'Help you too. Be aware from' is incorrect; it should be 'help you to be aware of'. 'Disaster' should be plural 'disasters'. 'Make' should be 'cause' in this context. Also, punctuation was corrected for clarity.