机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习使用完整句子并注意语法结构，同时避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以尝试用简单明了的句子描述机器的功能和你喜欢它的原因。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because we bought it last month. It has many useful functions that save me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议加强句子结构的练习，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供更具体的细节来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because our family is very busy. These machines save a lot of time and effort, making household chores easier and more efficient.

建議: 回答较为简短且有语法错误，建议扩展答案，使用完整句子，并且用连接词使表达更自然。可以具体说明阅读说明书的好处。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because modern machines have many functions. Reading the manual helps me understand how to use them properly and avoid mistakes.

建議: 回答内容重复且语法不够准确，建议避免重复表达，使用更丰富的词汇和句型来阐述观点，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because machines today have many features. Understanding these helps me use the machines effectively and prevents damage.

× Now now my favorite machine, my home is the washing machine because our family just bought it last month.

✓ Now, my favorite machine at home is the washing machine because our family just bought it last month.

句子中“my home”应改为“at home”，表示地点，且“Now now”重复，应去掉一个。

× It is very new and how many function.

✓ It is very new and has many functions.

“how many function”用法错误，应使用“has many functions”表示“有许多功能”。

× So it's really so my time and. The effort. To.

✓ So it really saves my time and effort.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，需调整为完整句子表达意思。

× Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important, because our family members are you really very busy these days?

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because our family members are really very busy these days.

“are you really very busy”中“you”使用错误，应去掉，保持主语一致。

× We don't have much time or energy to do the laundry and cleaning went merrily.

✓ We don't have much time or energy to do the laundry and cleaning work properly.

“cleaning went merrily”表达不当，应改为“cleaning work properly”更符合语境。

× These machines still a lot of time and effort, making it household requires much easier and more efficient.

✓ These machines save a lot of time and effort, making household chores much easier and more efficient.

原句缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整，需调整为完整句子。

× Yes, of course. These days the machines are have a lot of functions, so we have to read the instructions to know all of their functions and how to.

✓ Yes, of course. These days, machines have a lot of functions, so we have to read the instructions to know all of their functions and how to use them.

“are have”重复错误，应去掉“are”；句尾不完整，需补充“use them”。

× Yes, it is significantly important to read the instructions because nowadays the machines have a lot of functions and we have to read the instructions to. Understand their function and how to apply them.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because nowadays machines have a lot of functions, and we have to read the instructions to understand their functions and how to apply them.

句子中断，需将“Understand”改为小写并与前句连贯，且“significantly important”改为更自然的“very important”。