机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences and avoid unclear phrases like 'change shield' and 'he's nearly eat'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say how the air conditioner helps you sleep better and keeps the air fresh.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. It keeps the room cool during hot weather, which helps me sleep well. Moreover, it maintains clean and fresh air, making the environment comfortable.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, instead of starting the second sentence with 'As', you can say 'They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing things by hand'. Also, try to avoid minor errors like 'efforts' should be 'effort' and 'by had' should be 'by hand'.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort compared to doing things by hand. Therefore, these machines make daily chores easier and allow people to focus on more important tasks.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please try to form a complete and clear sentence. Explain why you read instructions, using linking words to connect your ideas. For example, you can say you read instructions to use the machine correctly and avoid damage.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine so that I can operate it correctly and avoid causing any damage.

建議: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by combining sentences to avoid fragmentation. Use linking words like 'because' within the sentence instead of starting a new sentence. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more naturally.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it correctly and avoid any mistakes that might damage the machine or harm myself.

× His air conditioner.

✓ His air conditioner.

The sentence fragment 'His air conditioner.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'It is his air conditioner.' or 'My favorite machine is the air conditioner.' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× It keep.

✓ It keeps.

The verb 'keep' should be in the third person singular form 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× The home cool during hot weather, which is a change shield for sleeping well.

✓ It keeps the home cool during hot weather, which is a change shield for sleeping well.

The sentence lacks a proper subject and verb at the beginning. Adding 'It keeps' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× And he's nearly eat, maintain clean and fresh air.

✓ And it nearly eats, maintains clean and fresh air.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect for an air conditioner; 'it' should be used. Also, 'eat' should be 'eats' and 'maintain' should be 'maintains' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. However, 'eats' is not appropriate here; likely the intended meaning is 'consumes' or 'uses' energy. A better correction is 'And it nearly consumes energy, maintaining clean and fresh air.'

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are very important.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important.

The noun 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to agree with 'sweeping machines' and the context of talking about machines in general.

× As this saves a lot of time and efforts compared to doing things by had.

✓ As this saves a lot of time and effort compared to doing things by hand.

The word 'efforts' should be 'effort' as an uncountable noun here. 'Had' is a typo and should be 'hand' as the correct preposition phrase is 'by hand'.

× These machines make daily chores easier and allow people to focus all their important tasks.

✓ These machines make daily chores easier and allow people to focus on all their important tasks.

The phrase 'focus all their important tasks' is missing the preposition 'on' which is necessary after 'focus'.

× G as I read the instructions before using a machine to use it in right away and to ignore the damage.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine to use it correctly and to avoid damage.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'G as' is likely a typo for 'Yes'. 'Use it in right away' is incorrect; it should be 'use it correctly'. 'Ignore the damage' should be 'avoid damage'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I always read the instructions carefully. Before using a machine because it helps me to understand how to operate the machine correctly.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because it helps me to understand how to operate the machine correctly.

The sentence is split incorrectly. 'Before using a machine because...' is a dependent clause and should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.