机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些不自然，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整且正确的句子，并且避免重复和不相关的内容。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达你的观点，并补充具体的细节。

範例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop. I use it for studying, watching movies, and keeping in touch with my friends. It is very convenient and portable, so I can use it anywhere.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构也不够清晰。建议你使用更准确的词汇和语法，注意句子连贯性，并且补充具体的原因和比较。

範例: I think washing machines are more important than sweeping machines because they are more common and convenient in my family. In China, most families have washing machines, but sweeping machines are less popular.

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议你简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且说明具体情况。

範例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine. However, before buying it, I will check the instructions on my phone. After I get the machine, I usually use it directly.

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确，句子不够连贯。建议你使用正确的语法和连接词，使回答更自然流畅，并且补充具体的理由。

範例: I think it depends on the machine. If I am familiar with it, I don't think it's necessary to read the instructions. But if it's a new machine, I will read the instructions carefully.

× Checked in with friends is like my little portable ward.

✓ Checking in with friends is like my little portable world.

The original sentence uses 'Checked' which is the past participle form incorrectly as the subject. The gerund form 'Checking' should be used here to function as a noun. Also, 'ward' seems to be a typo for 'world'.

× I think the washing machine is more important than sweeping machines because the washing machine is more convenient and more comment in my family, I think.

✓ I think the washing machine is more important than sweeping machines because the washing machine is more convenient and more common in my family, I think.

The word 'comment' is a typo and should be 'common' to correctly describe frequency or prevalence. This is a vocabulary error related to word choice rather than grammar, but it affects clarity.

× Add in China the most of family has washing machine but the sweeping machine not is like that.

✓ Also in China, most families have washing machines but sweeping machines are not like that.

'The most of family' is incorrect; it should be 'most families' to indicate plural. 'Has washing machine' should be 'have washing machines' to agree in number. 'The sweeping machine not is like that' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'sweeping machines are not like that' for subject-verb agreement and word order.

× I think I not really read the instruction before using that because when I choice to this when I make a decision to bite it, I will read instruction before in my phone and I when I get it I will. Straight use it.

✓ I think I don't really read the instructions before using it because when I choose to buy it, I will read the instructions on my phone, and when I get it, I will use it straight away.

'I not really read' is incorrect; modal 'don't' is needed for negation. 'Choice' should be 'choose' (verb). 'Bite' is a typo for 'buy'. 'Read instruction before in my phone' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'read the instructions on my phone'. Sentence structure and word order are improved for clarity.

× If is fimilar instructor.

✓ If it is a familiar instruction.

Missing subject 'it' and article 'a' before 'familiar instruction'. Also, 'fimilar' is a typo for 'familiar'.

× If it is a familiar machine with me, I don't think is important to read the instruction, but if the machine I haven't get in touch before I will. Read the instruction.

✓ If it is a familiar machine to me, I don't think it is important to read the instructions, but if I haven't used the machine before, I will read the instructions.

'With me' should be 'to me' for correct preposition. Missing subject 'it' before 'is important'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it usually refers to multiple steps. 'I haven't get in touch before' is incorrect; 'I haven't used before' is more appropriate. Sentence structure improved for clarity.