机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, "I rely on its every morning" should be "I rely on it every morning," and "does not only save me time but also help me cut down on expenses" should be "not only saves me time but also helps me cut down on expenses." Also, try to use linking words like "which" or "that" to connect ideas smoothly. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

範例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the coffee maker because I rely on it every morning to kick-start my day. It is extremely convenient and easy to use, which allows me to brew fresh coffee quickly without visiting a coffee shop. This not only saves me time but also helps me reduce expenses.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases that reduce clarity and coherence. For example, "washing machine since whipping machines" seems to be a typo for "washing machines and sweeping machines." Also, "These machine helps save time and effort Mickey household chores much more easier inconvenience" is confusing and ungrammatical. Try to proofread your answers and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas logically. Use plural forms correctly and avoid unclear words.

範例: I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives. Since most people work from 9:00 to 5:00, they often feel too tired to do housework after work. Therefore, these machines help save time and effort, making household chores much easier and more convenient.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "Usually are just look at about in" and "how it worse by experimenting." These errors affect the naturalness and clarity of your response. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words like "however" appropriately to contrast ideas. Keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: I seldom read the instructions before using a machine because I find them tedious and time-consuming. Usually, I just look at the buttons and try to figure out how it works by experimenting. However, if the machine seems complicated, I might glance at the manual to avoid making mistakes.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear and relevant, but there is a contradiction in "use the machines safely incorrectly." It should be "use the machines safely and correctly." Also, "reading instruction is quite crucial" should be "reading instructions is quite crucial." Try to avoid repeating the same idea twice and use linking words like "for example" effectively. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and natural.

範例: I think it's quite crucial to read the instructions because they help ensure that you use the machines safely and correctly. For example, following the guidelines can prevent accidents and avoid damaging the equipment. Therefore, reading instructions is important to protect both yourself and the device.

× I rely on its every morning to kick start my day and extremely convenient and easy to use.

✓ I rely on it every morning to kick start my day and it is extremely convenient and easy to use.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrect here because it should refer to the coffee maker as 'it'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject for 'extremely convenient and easy to use', so 'it is' is needed to complete the sentence.

× Allowing me to brew fresh coffee quickly without having to visit a coffee shop does not only save me time but also help me cut down on expenses.

✓ It allows me to brew fresh coffee quickly without having to visit a coffee shop, which not only saves me time but also helps me cut down on expenses.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a clear subject. Starting with 'Allowing me' is incorrect. Changing it to 'It allows me' provides a clear subject and verb. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Well, I definitely think washing machine since whipping machines are very important in our daily lives.

✓ Well, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives.

The singular 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'whipping machines' is a typo and should be 'sweeping machines'.

× These machine helps save time and effort Mickey household chores much more easier inconvenience.

✓ These machines help save time and effort, making household chores much easier and more convenient.

'These machine' should be 'These machines' (plural). The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject. The phrase 'Mickey household chores much more easier inconvenience' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'making household chores much easier and more convenient' for clarity and correctness.

× I seldom read the instructions before using machine because I find them quite tedious and time-consuming.

✓ I seldom read the instructions before using a machine because I find them quite tedious and time-consuming.

The noun 'machine' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Usually are just look at about in and try to figure out how it worse by experimenting.

✓ Usually, I just look at it and try to figure out how it works by experimenting.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding the subject 'I' and correcting 'worse' to 'works' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× However, if the machine seems complicated, I might glance at the menu to avoid making mistakes.

✓ However, if the machine seems complicated, I might glance at the manual to avoid making mistakes.

'Menu' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'manual' when referring to instructions for a machine.

× I think it's quite crucial to read the instructions because they help ensure that you use the machines safely incorrectly.

✓ I think it's quite crucial to read the instructions because they help ensure that you use the machines safely and correctly.

The phrase 'safely incorrectly' is contradictory and incorrect. It should be 'safely and correctly' to convey the intended meaning.

× Therefore, reading instruction is quite crucial to protect both yourself and the device.

✓ Therefore, reading instructions is quite crucial to protect both yourself and the device.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps.