机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the oil-free fryer because it allows us to cook food without using oil. My mom often uses it to fry meat or chicken, which helps our family eat healthier and reduce the risk of heart disease.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and provide more specific reasons.

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. My mom uses them every day to keep the house clean because she likes a tidy environment. I believe that a clean home creates a comfortable and relaxing space for everyone.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid incorrect word choices. Also, connect your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: Absolutely, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how it works. This makes it easier to use and prevents damage. Reading instructions is especially helpful for elderly people.

建議: Your answer repeats ideas and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps people understand how to use machines properly and avoid accidental damage. It is especially useful for elderly people to ensure they can operate machines safely.

× Well is the oil free fryer and it's really useful and convenient to cook.

✓ Well, it is the oil-free fryer and it's really useful and convenient for cooking.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'Well' and uses 'to cook' incorrectly. The phrase 'convenient to cook' should be 'convenient for cooking' to correctly use the gerund form after 'convenient'.

× My mom usually user to fry meat or chicken without oil and I think eating.

✓ My mom usually uses it to fry meat or chicken without oil, and I think eating less oil will improve my family's health and prevent heart disease in the future.

The verb 'user' is incorrect; it should be 'uses'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to the fryer. The sentence is incomplete and fragmented; it needs to be combined properly. 'Eating less oil' should be connected to the health benefit. 'Heart disease' was misspelled as 'hurt disease'.

× My mom usually user to fry meat or chicken without oil and I think eating. Less oil will improve my family health and avoid hurt disease in the future.

✓ My mom usually uses it to fry meat or chicken without oil, and I think eating less oil will improve my family's health and prevent heart disease in the future.

The phrase 'my family health' should be 'my family's health' to show possession. 'Avoid hurt disease' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prevent heart disease'.

× Yes, of course, my mom usually do this house work everyday like washing or swimming because she is a person who tend to keep the house tidy.

✓ Yes, of course, my mom usually does this housework every day like washing or sweeping because she is a person who tends to keep the house tidy.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'my mom'. 'House work' should be one word 'housework'. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the adverb phrase 'every day' is correct here. 'Swimming' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'sweeping'. 'Tend' should be 'tends' to agree with singular subject 'she'.

× Ann and I believe that keeping the house clean it can create a comfortable space to live and realize.

✓ Ann and I believe that keeping the house clean can create a comfortable space to live in and relax.

The sentence has an unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'keeping the house clean'. The phrase 'to live and realize' is unclear; likely intended 'to live in and relax'. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Absolutely gripping the instructions before using a machine is really important.

✓ Absolutely, reading the instructions before using a machine is really important.

The word 'gripping' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'reading'. Also, a comma after 'Absolutely' improves clarity.

× Because it helped me understand how the machine work an easier to use it and avoid to break it.

✓ Because it helps me understand how the machine works, making it easier to use and avoid breaking it.

The verb tense should be present 'helps' to match the context. 'Work' should be 'works' to agree with singular 'machine'. 'An easier to use it' is incorrect; it should be 'making it easier to use'. 'Avoid to break it' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid breaking it'.

× And I think interesting is really convenient for everyone, especially elder.

✓ And I think it is really convenient for everyone, especially the elderly.

'Interesting' is incorrect here; likely intended 'it is'. 'Elder' should be 'the elderly' to refer to older people properly.

× Of course, yes, reading the instruction not only help people understand the machine was.

✓ Of course, yes, reading the instructions not only helps people understand how the machine works.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'reading'. 'The machine was' is incorrect; it should be 'how the machine works'.

× But also help them avoid to damage.

✓ But also helps them avoid damaging it.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Avoid to damage' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid damaging'. The object 'it' is needed to clarify what is being damaged.

× Acidentally, the machine an I think reading instruction especially convenient for elderly people or as is ensures they can operate.

✓ Accidentally damaging the machine can be avoided, and I think reading instructions is especially convenient for elderly people as it ensures they can operate it safely.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Acidentally' is misspelled. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Or as is' is unclear and replaced with 'as it'. Added 'safely' for completeness.