机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你使用更准确的词汇（如refrigerator而非referee），并且注意句子结构，避免冗长和重复。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持你的观点。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator. It is very useful in summer because it helps keep my vegetables fresh for a longer time. This prevents food waste and saves money.

建議: 回答中存在发音和拼写错误（如sweet peas machines应为sweeping machines），句子结构混乱。建议你使用正确的词汇，简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For example, I can finish cleaning the house quickly and have more time to relax.

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单句子表达原因，并避免重复。

範例: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a new machine because I find them too complicated and boring.

建議: 回答中有很多不连贯和错误的词汇，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单清晰的句子表达观点，并举例说明。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions when using a new machine, especially if it has advanced features that I am not familiar with.

× my favorite machine at home is definitely the referee.

✓ my favorite machine at home is definitely the refrigerator.

这里的'referee'是拼写错误，正确的单词是'refrigerator'，表示冰箱。冰箱是单数名词，符合句意。

× it helps me to provide my vegetables in other flows for a longer time.

✓ it helps me to preserve my vegetables for a longer time.

这里'provide my vegetables in other flows'表达不正确，应该用'preserve'表示保存，且不需要'in other flows'。

× improve prevent waste, which makes my.

✓ improve and prevent waste, which helps me a lot.

这里缺少连词，应该用'and'连接'improve'和'prevent'，且句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× washing machines and sweet peas machines very important

✓ washing machines and sweeping machines are very important

'sweet peas machines'拼写错误，正确应为'sweeping machines'，且缺少动词'are'。

× washing machines and sweet peas machines very important

✓ washing machines and sweeping machines are very important

主语是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。

× Meffert for example, I only enjoying watching closes or cleaning the house, so having this machines makes my life much easier in Mocha menyard.

✓ For example, I only enjoy watching clothes or cleaning the house, so having these machines makes my life much easier in my backyard.

'Meffert'拼写错误，应为'For example'；'enjoying'应为动词原形'enjoy'；'closes'应为'clothes'；'this machines'应为'these machines'；'Mocha menyard'应为'my backyard'。

× They help me finish chores quickly, allow me to relax.

✓ They help me finish chores quickly and allow me to relax.

两个动词之间缺少连词'and'，使句子更连贯。

× No, are you? Are you really don't read the instructions before using a new machine?

✓ No, I don't. I really don't read the instructions before using a new machine.

'are you?'用法错误，应该用'I don't'来回答否定问题。

× Because I'm a person who tend to be quite lazy.

✓ Because I'm a person who tends to be quite lazy.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词'tend'应加's'变为'tends'。

× the instructions are often very complicated in fold of technical terms which knowing me and lost my interest quickly.

✓ the instructions are often very complicated and full of technical terms which confuse me and make me lose interest quickly.

'in fold of'应为'full of'；'knowing me'应为'confuse me'；'lost my interest'应为'make me lose interest'。

× Yes, is very useful to use a new machine, especially when I meet up machines with the latest technology QLE Fisher features, but people don't know how to use.

✓ Yes, it is very useful to read instructions when using a new machine, especially when I encounter machines with the latest technology and features, but people don't know how to use them.

缺少主语'it'；'meet up machines'应为'encounter machines'；'QLE Fisher features'拼写错误，应为'and features'；句尾缺少代词'them'。

× Tom new machines. Eskape dear.

✓ New machines can be difficult to use without instructions.

原句无意义，需重构句子表达正确意思。