机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，且内容不够具体。建议回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用连词连接具体的细节，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because it is portable and multifunctional. For example, I use it to search for information and watch educational videos, which helps me study effectively.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且细节不够准确（洗衣机不洗碗）。建议用正确的词汇表达，并提供具体且准确的细节。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean our clothes efficiently, and sweeping machines help keep the house clean.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但存在语法错误和用词不当（raise/watch instructions）。建议使用正确的表达，并保持句子简洁连贯。

範例: Sometimes I read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly. Otherwise, I might press the wrong button and cause an accident.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议先明确回答，再用连词连接具体原因，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, especially if the machine is complex. Otherwise, you might press the wrong button, cause an accident, and waste more time fixing the problem.

× I think is my laptop because it is quite portable and I can.

✓ I think it is my laptop because it is quite portable and I can use it.

句子缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整。应补充主语使句子完整。

× They use it in many ways.

✓ I use it in many ways.

句中主语与上下文不符，应使用第一人称“I”而非“they”。

× It was very functional.

✓ It is very functional.

描述现在的情况应使用现在时，使用过去时“was”不符合语境。

× First I can I can use it to study like searching for information is watching videos about the study second.

✓ First, I can use it to study, like searching for information and watching videos about my study.

句子结构混乱，重复“I can”，且连接词使用不当，应调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Is I think these things is very important because it they can help us save alot alot alot of time and effort.

✓ I think these things are very important because they can help us save a lot of time and effort.

主语“these things”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”；“it they”重复且错误，应去掉“it”；“alot”应分开为“a lot”。

× For example the washing machine can help us wash the dishes and sweeping machine can help to keep the host ID.

✓ For example, the washing machine can help us wash the dishes and the sweeping machine can help to keep the house tidy.

“host ID”应为“house tidy”，原词拼写错误且用词不当。

× If I don't have that we need to spend a lot of time doing this.

✓ If I don't have them, I need to spend a lot of time doing this.

主语和代词不一致，“that”应改为复数“them”，且主语应为“I”而非“we”。

× Sometimes I read the instructions before using the machine because it can help me understand how the machine works.

✓ Sometimes I read the instructions before using the machine because they can help me understand how the machine works.

“instructions”是复数，代词应使用“they”而非“it”。

× Also, if I don't raise the instructions, I may press the wrong button and that will make a accident.

✓ Also, if I don't read the instructions, I may press the wrong button and that will cause an accident.

“raise”应为“read”；“make a accident”应为“cause an accident”，冠词“a”应改为“an”。

× However, sometimes I don't watch the instruction if the machines.

✓ However, sometimes I don't read the instructions for the machines.

“watch the instruction”用词错误，应为“read the instructions”；句子结构不完整，应补充介词“for”。

× Is this thing? Sometimes is is important to read the instructions if the machine looks very hard to understand, very complex, Because if you don't read this, you may press the wrong button and create a accident, and you may spend more time to deal with that.

✓ Sometimes it is important to read the instructions if the machine looks very hard to understand or very complex, because if you don't read them, you may press the wrong button and create an accident, and you may spend more time dealing with that.

句子中多处语法错误，如“Is this thing?”无意义，应删除；“is is”重复；连接词使用不当；冠词错误“a accident”应为“an accident”；动词形式错误“spend more time to deal”应为“spend more time dealing”。

× So I think you better.

✓ So I think it is better to do so.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，应补充完整表达。