机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la clarté et la fluidité de votre réponse en évitant les erreurs grammaticales et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse. Par exemple, commencez par une phrase claire, puis expliquez pourquoi vous aimez cette machine avec des détails spécifiques et utilisez des connecteurs logiques.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the Dyson vacuum cleaner because it has multiple functions and adjustable suction levels. Moreover, it helps keep my home clean, which I really appreciate. Therefore, I enjoy using it during weekends to relax while tidying up.

建議: Faites attention à la grammaire et à la prononciation des mots, et utilisez des phrases plus claires et cohérentes. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour relier vos idées et donnez des exemples précis et corrects pour soutenir votre opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in daily life because they help us stay organized and maintain cleanliness. For instance, washing machines keep our clothes clean and fresh, while sweeping machines help prevent diseases by removing dust and dirt.

建議: Améliorez la précision de votre vocabulaire et évitez les erreurs comme "their matching" qui n'a pas de sens ici. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et donnez des exemples clairs et pertinents.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using any machine because it helps me operate it safely and efficiently. For example, by following the guidelines, I can prevent damaging the machine or causing accidents. This is especially important for complex devices.

建議: Travaillez sur la structure de vos phrases pour qu'elles soient complètes et grammaticalement correctes. Évitez les mots incorrects comme "wise Leanne" et utilisez des connecteurs pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente. Donnez des raisons claires et précises pour soutenir votre opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it helps us use machines wisely and prevents damage. Although many people ignore instructions, following them is crucial to ensure safety and prolong the machine's lifespan.

× My favorite machine in my home is vacuum cleaner from Dyson.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a vacuum cleaner from Dyson.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'vacuum cleaner'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× It has so many functions, many levels of vacuum and it helps my home to be always clean an has noticed.

✓ It has so many functions, many levels of vacuum, and it helps keep my home always clean and well-maintained.

The phrase 'an has noticed' is incorrect and unclear. Also, 'helps my home to be always clean' is awkward; 'helps keep my home always clean' is more natural. The sentence needed correction for clarity and proper plural usage.

× So that's why I really enjoy using this vacuum cleaner to relax in my weekends.

✓ So that's why I really enjoy using this vacuum cleaner to relax on my weekends.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to days or periods like 'weekends'. The correct preposition is 'on'. This is a sentence structure and preposition usage issue.

× Yes, I think the washing machines and sweeping machines or really important in our daily life because it helps us to be more organized and more clean.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really important in our daily life because they help us to be more organized and cleaner.

The verb 'or' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'it helps' should be 'they help' to match the plural subject. 'More clean' should be 'cleaner' for correct adjective form.

× For example, wishing must machines helps are closed to always be clean and smells good and the sweeping machines helps us to prevent from disease and virus.

✓ For example, washing machines help our clothes to always be clean and smell good, and sweeping machines help us prevent diseases and viruses.

Several errors: 'wishing must machines' should be 'washing machines'; 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject; 'are closed to always be clean' is incorrect and replaced with 'help our clothes to always be clean'; 'smells good' should be 'smell good' to agree with plural subject; 'helps us to prevent from disease and virus' should be 'help us prevent diseases and viruses'.

× For example, by following the guidelines, I can avoid their matching the machine or causing accidents.

✓ For example, by following the guidelines, I can avoid damaging the machine or causing accidents.

The phrase 'their matching the machine' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'damaging the machine'. This is a misuse of words rather than modal verb, but since 'can avoid' is correct, the main correction is vocabulary.

× Because it helps us to operate the machines wise Leanne to prevent it from. Being damaged, many people ignore the instruction reading, but it's really important and crucial.

✓ Because it helps us operate the machines wisely to prevent them from being damaged. Many people ignore reading the instructions, but it's really important and crucial.

The original sentence has several errors: 'wise Leanne' is incorrect and should be 'wisely'; 'to prevent it from. Being damaged' is fragmented and should be 'to prevent them from being damaged'; 'instruction reading' should be 'reading the instructions'. The sentence structure and word choice needed correction for clarity and grammar.