机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有较多语法和表达错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音和语法的准确性，避免词汇拼写错误，并且回答时尽量简洁明了，避免重复。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the coffee maker because I drink coffee every day. I use it every morning to make French coffee, which is cheaper than buying it outside.

建議: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议练习使用连接词，使回答更连贯，同时提供具体的理由和例子。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and energy compared to doing chores manually. For example, my washing machine helps me clean clothes quickly and efficiently.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，同时表达观点时要更明确。

範例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I find them complicated and time-consuming. Instead, I prefer watching videos on the Internet, which are easier to understand.

建議: 回答重复且表达不清，建议避免重复观点，使用完整句子表达，并且提供理由支持观点。

範例: I don't think it is very important to read instructions because they can be complicated and take a lot of time. Watching videos online is easier and helps me learn how to use machines quickly.

× My favorite Martian is coffee maker becauses M coffee number and I need changing coffee every day so I use it every morning to make French coffee and making it at home is.

✓ My favorite machine is the coffee maker because I drink coffee every day and I need to make coffee every day, so I use it every morning to make French coffee, and making it at home is

这里“Martian”应为“machine”，且“coffee maker”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指。句中“M coffee number”不通顺，改为“I drink coffee every day”更符合表达。动词“changing”应改为不定式“to make”或“to change”，这里用“to make”更合适。

× making it at home is. Cheaper than buying outside.

✓ making it at home is cheaper than buying outside.

句中“is.”后不应有句号，且“Cheaper”首字母不应大写，两个句子应合并为一句。

× Yeah, I think they are so significant because they save some amount of. Une tonne and energy compared to traditional methods and the can also keep cleaning and in my home in addition and I have.

✓ Yeah, I think they are very significant because they save some amount of water and energy compared to traditional methods, and they can also keep my home clean. In addition, I have them.

“Une tonne”是法语，应该用英文“water”。“the can”应为“they can”。“keep cleaning and in my home”表达不清，改为“keep my home clean”更准确。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× No, I really didn't read instructions because I think it's the actual company kated and time consuming to read.

✓ No, I really don't read instructions because I think it's actually complicated and time-consuming to read.

“didn't read”与后文“think”时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“don't read”。“actual company kated”应为“actually complicated”。“time consuming”应加连字符“time-consuming”。

× I prefer to watch videos on the Internet which is easy to understand how to.

✓ I prefer to watch videos on the Internet which are easy to understand and show how to use the machine.

“which is easy to understand how to”结构不完整，缺少宾语，改为“which are easy to understand and show how to use the machine”更完整。

× I think it's not important because I think reading instructions to Co kated and time consuming.

✓ I think it's not important because I think reading instructions is complicated and time-consuming.

“to Co kated”应为“is complicated”。“reading instructions”后应接系动词“is”。

× I think watching the video on the Internet is. Was easier. In 2.

✓ I think watching videos on the Internet is easier.

“is. Was easier. In 2.”句子断裂且时态混乱，应统一为一般现在时“is easier”。