机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达，同时注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I don't have to wash clothes by hand, which is very convenient.

建議: 回答中“freeze the hands of human”表达不准确，建议使用更贴切的表达方式，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they save our hands from hard work, allowing us to have more free time. However, they can be expensive, so not everyone can afford them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“watch the radios”和“directly usage”，建议使用正确的表达并简洁明了地回答问题。

範例: If I haven't used a machine before, I always read the instructions carefully. But if I am familiar with it, I usually use it directly without reading.

建議: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并注意主谓一致和词汇准确。

範例: Yes, it is important to read instructions because machines often have many functions. Reading them can save time and effort by avoiding trial and error.

× Well, my favorite machine, my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me, allowed to wear, had a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hand and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me. When I have a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hands and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

原句中“allowed to wear, had a lot of clothes to wash”时态和表达不正确，应使用现在时态和正确的表达方式。建议改为“when I have a lot of clothes to wash”，表示条件状况。

× Well, my favorite machine, my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me, allowed to wear, had a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hand and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me. When I have a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hands and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

原句中缺少介词“in”来表示“在我家中”，应为“my favorite machine in my home”。

× Well, my favorite machine, my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me, allowed to wear, had a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hand and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me. When I have a lot of clothes to wash, I don't need to use my hands and it saves me a lot of effort as well.

原句中“use my hand”应为复数“use my hands”，因为洗衣时通常用双手。

× Well, I think they are important and useful because they freeze the hands of human and in that case we can have more spare time to do other things.

✓ Well, I think they are important and useful because they protect human hands and in that case we can have more spare time to do other things.

原句中“freeze the hands of human”表达不当，应为“protect human hands”或类似表达，且“human”应为复数或用复数形式。

× But on the other hand, sometimes they're also expensive, so many people could not afford them.

✓ But on the other hand, sometimes they're also expensive, so many people cannot afford them.

原句中“could not”表达过去能力，语境应为现在时，故用“cannot”。

× Uh, if this is the kind of motion that I haven't used before, I will definitely read the instructions and sometimes I even watch the radios.

✓ Uh, if this is the kind of machine that I haven't used before, I will definitely read the instructions and sometimes I even watch the videos.

原句中“kind of motion”用词不当，应为“kind of machine”；“watch the radios”表达错误，应为“watch the videos”或“watch the instructions video”。

× But if I have used it before, most of the time I will just directly usage.

✓ But if I have used it before, most of the time I will just use it directly.

原句中“directly usage”词性错误，应为副词+动词结构“use it directly”。

× Yes, of course it is important to read the instructions because most of the time there are the one more.

✓ Yes, of course it is important to read the instructions because most of the time there are more than one.

原句中“there are the one more”表达不正确，应为“there are more than one”表示数量多。

× She have more options than we can imagine and if we can read the instruction, it seems a lot of time and efforts to figure it out, like by trial and error.

✓ They have more options than we can imagine and if we can read the instructions, it saves a lot of time and effort to figure it out, like by trial and error.

原句中“She have”主谓不一致，应为“They have”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“seems a lot of time and efforts”表达错误，应为“saves a lot of time and effort”。