机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'helped me to war' and 'feel what I owe'. Try to give a direct topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons using linking words.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the television because it helps me relax after a long day. Whenever I feel stressed, I switch it on and watch my favourite shows, which cheers me up.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Please try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain why these machines are important. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific.

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our households because they save a lot of time and reduce the workload, especially for women. For example, washing machines clean clothes quickly, allowing us to focus on other tasks.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and concise response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain when you read instructions.

範例: Generally, I do not read the instructions before using a machine. However, if I face any difficulty while using it, I then read the manual to understand how to operate it properly.

建議: Your answer has good points but needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid unclear phrases like 'reason instruction' and 'stroke in between'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because it helps us avoid mistakes and use the machine more efficiently. Moreover, it makes the operation more convenient and safe.

× My favorite machine in home is TV because it helped me to war.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the TV because it helps me to relax.

The phrase 'in home' should be 'at home' to indicate location correctly. 'TV' is a singular noun and should be preceded by 'the'. The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context suggests a present habit, so 'helps' is appropriate. 'war' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; likely intended 'relax'.

× It had made relax.

✓ It helps me relax.

The past perfect tense 'had made' is incorrect here; the present tense 'helps' fits better as the action is habitual. Also, 'made relax' is incorrect; the verb 'help' is used with the base verb 'relax' without 'to'.

× Whenever I feel what I owe, I switch on the TV and watch my favorite show.

✓ Whenever I feel tired, I switch on the TV and watch my favorite show.

The phrase 'feel what I owe' is unclear and incorrect. Likely intended 'feel tired' or 'feel low'. Pronouns and expressions should be clear and appropriate to context.

× Yes, what machine are important in our household into it to help in saving more time it when I reduce the hardship for a household woman washing machine and sweep machine at the best option for clothes and we have to not have to waste time.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important in our household because they help save time and reduce the hardship for household women. Washing machines and sweeping machines are the best options for clothes and cleaning, so we do not have to waste time.

The sentence has multiple singular/plural errors: 'what machine are' should be 'which machines are'; 'washing machine and sweep machine' should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. Also, sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, generally I don't read instruction while using machine when sometime I struck using age.

✓ No, generally I don't read instructions while using a machine, but sometimes I get stuck. So I read the manual to learn how to use it better.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Using machine' needs an article 'a machine'. 'Sometime I struck using age' is unclear; corrected to 'sometimes I get stuck'. Pronouns and sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Yes, I think it is very important to reason instruction because we can avoid mistake, can use the machine more efficiently and it is very convenient to us. And we can stroke in between.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions because we can avoid mistakes, use the machine more efficiently, and it is very convenient for us. Also, we can avoid getting stuck in between.

'Reason instruction' is incorrect; should be 'read instructions'. 'Mistake' should be plural 'mistakes'. 'Convenient to us' should be 'convenient for us'. 'Stroke in between' is unclear; likely meant 'get stuck in between'. Pronouns and word choice corrected for clarity.