机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, say "One of my favourite machines is the vacuum cleaner because it makes my life easier. I can clean my house quickly and efficiently with it."

範例: One of my favourite machines is the vacuum cleaner because it makes my life easier. I can clean my house quickly and efficiently with it.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, definitely. Nowadays, people are very busy with their jobs, so they don't have enough time to wash clothes or clean the house by hand. Therefore, these machines save time and help keep clothes and floors clean."

範例: Yes, definitely. Nowadays, people are very busy with their jobs, so they don't have enough time to wash clothes or clean the house by hand. Therefore, these machines save time and help keep clothes and floors clean.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "Of course, I always try to read the instruction manual before using a machine because different equipment has various modes and functions. Also, different manufacturers design machines differently, so reading instructions helps me operate them smoothly."

範例: Of course, I always try to read the instruction manual before using a machine because different equipment has various modes and functions. Also, different manufacturers design machines differently, so reading instructions helps me operate them smoothly.

建議: Use complete sentences and connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. By following all the rules mentioned in the manual, we can operate the machine correctly. This ensures the machine functions smoothly and lasts longer."

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. By following all the rules mentioned in the manual, we can operate the machine correctly. This ensures the machine functions smoothly and lasts longer.

× One of my favorite machine is a vacuum machine because it make my life very easy.

✓ One of my favorite machines is a vacuum machine because it makes my life very easy.

The phrase 'One of my favorite machine' should use the plural form 'machines' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'it make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× One of my favorite machine is a vacuum machine because it make my life very easy.

✓ One of my favorite machines is a vacuum machine because it makes my life very easy.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× And by using this machine I can clean my house and. Cleaned out letter and does very easily.

✓ By using this machine, I can clean my house and clean out the litter very easily.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms. 'Cleaned out letter' should be 'clean out the litter' and 'does very easily' is incorrect; it should be omitted or rephrased. Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here.

× Right now people are busy in their life, they are busy with their job and they don't have enough time to wash the clothes with Hinds and doing all cleaning in a house with her.

✓ Right now, people are busy with their lives and jobs, and they don't have enough time to wash clothes by hand or do all the cleaning in the house themselves.

The pronouns 'Hinds' and 'her' are incorrect here. 'Hinds' should be 'hand' and 'her' should be 'themselves' to correctly refer to people doing the cleaning. Also, 'in their life' should be 'with their lives'.

× So this machine should save their time and they came clean their clothes and floor.

✓ So this machine should save their time and help them clean their clothes and floors.

The phrase 'they came clean their clothes and floor' is incorrect. It should be 'help them clean their clothes and floors' to correctly express the intended meaning and use proper pronouns.

× Of course I always try to read a instruction book before I start machine because all all equipment have a different.

✓ Of course, I always try to read the instruction book before I start the machine because all equipment has different modes.

The article 'a' should be 'the' before 'instruction book' and 'machine' because they refer to specific items. Also, 'all all' is a repetition error, and 'equipment' is singular and should be followed by 'has' not 'have'.

× Of course I always try to read a instruction book before I start machine because all all equipment have a different. Modes and different. Manufacture company and they all work differently so that helped me to start equipment very smoothly and.

✓ Of course, I always try to read the instruction book before I start the machine because all equipment has different modes and is made by different manufacturers, and they all work differently, so that helps me to start the equipment very smoothly.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'Manufacture company' should be 'manufacturers'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yeah. By following all rules mention in manual. That help us to operate machine. I'm by following all steps, machine will function more smoothly.

✓ Yes, by following all the rules mentioned in the manual, it helps us operate the machine. By following all the steps, the machine will function more smoothly.

The modal verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'that'. Also, 'I'm by following' is incorrect and should be omitted. Articles 'the' are needed before 'rules', 'manual', and 'machine'.