机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My favorite Martian is swimming rowboat. It can help me same time in the keep my room tidy. In that case I can have enough time to play with my dog.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yes, Oh, I believe that's because they can help people save time. An engine of the long day. These machines can help you do a lot of housework so you can get a good relax.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
It depends, if days machine looks complicated I will rate them because they can help me use them in the right way. But if this machine is simple like fans air condition or just using by myself.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yes, definitely instructions can help people use machine you're right way and avoid mistake. You know it's very important because you can save a lot of time instead of wasting time to learn how to use it.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 40.0建議: 你的回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且回答要紧扣问题，表达清楚你喜欢的家用机器及其作用。
範例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner. It helps me keep my room tidy quickly, so I have more time to play with my dog.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议你使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词，清晰表达观点，并避免使用不准确的词汇。
範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. They help people finish housework quickly, so they can relax after a long day.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 45.0建議: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议你用完整的句子表达条件和原因，使用正确的词汇，并且注意句子结构的完整性。
範例: It depends. If the machine looks complicated, I will read the instructions because they help me use it correctly. But if the machine is simple, like a fan or air conditioner, I usually don't read the instructions.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确，建议你使用正确的句子结构和词汇，表达更自然流畅。
範例: Yes, I definitely think it is important to read the instructions. They help people use machines correctly and avoid mistakes, which saves time in the long run.
文法
× My favorite Martian is swimming rowboat.
✓ My favorite machine is a swimming rowboat.
这里'swimming rowboat'前缺少冠词'a'，且'Martian'应为'machine'，表示机器。名词单复数和词汇使用错误。
× It can help me same time in the keep my room tidy.
✓ It can help me save time and keep my room tidy.
原句中'same time in the keep'结构错误，应为'save time and keep'，介词使用不当。
× An engine of the long day.
✓ It is an energy saver for a long day.
原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。
× If days machine looks complicated I will rate them because they can help me use them in the right way.
✓ If the machine looks complicated, I will read the instructions because they can help me use it in the right way.
'days machine'应为'the machine'，'rate them'应为'read the instructions'，代词使用错误，导致句意不明。
× But if this machine is simple like fans air condition or just using by myself.
✓ But if this machine is simple, like fans or air conditioners, I just use it by myself.
缺少逗号分隔，'air condition'应为'air conditioners'，介词'by'使用不当，句子结构不完整。
× Yes, definitely instructions can help people use machine you're right way and avoid mistake.
✓ Yes, definitely instructions can help people use machines the right way and avoid mistakes.
'you're'应为'the'，'machine'应为复数形式，'mistake'应为复数，代词和名词单复数使用错误。
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