机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“sweeping about”和“Cape my room”表达不清晰，建议使用正确的词汇和句式表达清洁机器的作用，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner. It saves me a lot of time and helps keep my room tidy, which is very important to me because I don't like doing housework.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“help us saving”应为“help us save”，同时表达可以更自然流畅，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, definitely. As I mentioned before, they help us save a lot of time, so we can do other things. For example, I have more spare time to play with my dog and build Lego models.

建議: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不完整且含义不清，建议简化句子结构，明确表达是否阅读说明书的习惯。

範例: If I am familiar with a machine, like an air conditioner, I usually don't read the instructions. But if I am not familiar with it, I always read the instructions to use it correctly.

建議: 回答中“merchants”用词错误，应为“machines”，同时句子结构需调整以表达更自然，建议注意单复数和冠词的使用。

範例: Yes, it is very important. Instructions help people use different machines in the right way. They can save time and help avoid mistakes.

× My favorite machine is sweeping about.

✓ My favorite machine is the sweeper.

这里'sweeping about'用法不正确，应该用名词'sweeper'来表示机器。动词的-ing形式不能直接作为名词使用。

× It helps me save a lot of time and Cape my room.

✓ It helps me save a lot of time and keep my room clean.

'Cape'用错了，应该是'verb keep'，后面加形容词'clean'表示保持房间整洁。

× Tidy is very important for me.

✓ Tidiness is very important to me.

'Tidy'是形容词，句中需要名词形式，应该用'tidiness'。另外，'important for me'习惯用法是'important to me'。

× I'm too lazy to do any house walks.

✓ I'm too lazy to do any housework.

'house walks'是错误搭配，正确表达是'housework'，表示家务活。

× Yes definitely, like I mentioned before they can help us saving a lot of time to do another things on.

✓ Yes definitely, like I mentioned before, they can help us save a lot of time to do other things.

'help'后面接动词原形'save'，不是'saving'；'another things'错误，应该用'other things'。

× For me, I have more spare time to play with my dog and play my Lego models.

✓ For me, I have more spare time to play with my dog and build my Lego models.

'play my Lego models'不合适，应该用'build'表示搭建乐高模型。

× £80 If I familiar with this machine like then air condition I would not read instructions but I'm not familiar with it.

✓ If I am familiar with this machine, like the air conditioner, I would not read the instructions, but I'm not familiar with it.

句子缺少动词'am'，'like then air condition'应为'like the air conditioner'，句子结构混乱需要调整。

× I will rate thought this instruction to help me use them in right way.

✓ I will read through these instructions to help me use it in the right way.

'rate thought'错误，应为'read through'；'them'指代不明确，改为'it'指机器；'in right way'前应加定冠词'the'。

× Instructions can help people use different merchants in a right way.

✓ Instructions can help people use different machines in the right way.

'merchants'错误，应为'machines'；'a right way'应为'the right way'。

× It's well save time and avoid mistake.

✓ It can save time and avoid mistakes well.

'well'位置错误，应放在句末修饰动词；'avoid mistake'应为复数'mistakes'。