机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to avoid short, incomplete sentences like "Very convenient" and instead combine ideas for fluency.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it allows me to do laundry whenever I want, which is very convenient, especially during my busy schedule. This way, I don't have to leave the house just to wash my clothes.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid filler words like "Yeah" at the end.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save time. For instance, when we have a busy schedule, we can simply put our soiled clothes into the washing machine, which automatically cleans them, making household chores much easier.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid filler sounds like "UM."

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine if it is user-friendly and intuitive. However, if the machine has complicated functions, I make sure to read the instructions to save time and avoid mistakes.

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, especially when using a new machine. This helps prevent damage and ensures that you use the machine correctly.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machines are important in our lives.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important in our lives.

The sentence incorrectly uses the singular 'washing machine' alongside the plural 'sweeping machines'. Since both refer to general categories, both should be plural to maintain consistency and correct grammar.

× For example, when we are busy with our schedule, having washing machine is convenient because you just have to throw your dirty clothes or so you called soiled clothes into the washing machines and it will automatically washer.

✓ For example, when we are busy with our schedule, having a washing machine is convenient because you just have to throw your dirty clothes, or so-called soiled clothes, into the washing machine and it will automatically wash them.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'washing machine' and incorrectly uses 'washing machines' plural after referring to a single machine. Also, 'washer' is incorrectly used instead of the verb 'wash'. These errors confuse singular and plural forms and verb usage.

× For example, when we are busy with our schedule, having washing machine is convenient because you just have to throw your dirty clothes or so you called soiled clothes into the washing machines and it will automatically washer.

✓ For example, when we are busy with our schedule, having a washing machine is convenient because you just have to throw your dirty clothes, or so-called soiled clothes, into the washing machine and it will automatically wash them.

The word 'washer' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct verb form is 'wash' to describe the action the machine performs. Using the present participle or correct verb form is necessary for clarity.

× No, I don't use video feed instructions, especially if a machine is user-friendly, UM or read easy to use intuitively.

✓ No, I don't use video or written instructions, especially if a machine is user-friendly or easy to use intuitively.

The phrase 'video feed instructions' is unclear and likely incorrect. Also, 'UM or read easy to use intuitively' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the pronouns and phrasing for better understanding.

× However, if I find a machine that it has complicated. Functions then I have to read the instructions for me to save time and not too.

✓ However, if I find a machine that has complicated functions, then I have to read the instructions to save time and avoid mistakes.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and unclear phrasing. Removing the unnecessary pronoun 'it' and combining the sentence parts improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think especially if the machine is new and you have not been used it so for you to avoid.

✓ Yes, I think especially if the machine is new and you have not used it before, to avoid problems.

The phrase 'you have not been used it so for you to avoid' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'you have not used it before' and the sentence needs completion to clarify the purpose.

× To break the machine, it's better to use it better to read instructions.

✓ To avoid breaking the machine, it's better to read the instructions before using it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Reordering and clarifying the sentence structure improves meaning and grammatical correctness.