机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan agak membingungkan karena ada pengulangan dan struktur kalimat yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat, jelas, dan langsung ke inti jawaban dengan menggunakan kalimat topik dan detail pendukung yang relevan.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly. Although I don't have one myself, my husband owns one, so I can use it whenever I need to wash clothes.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan sulit dipahami karena penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk memberikan pendapat yang jelas dan mendukungnya dengan alasan yang spesifik serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they make household chores easier and save time. For example, using a washing machine helps me clean clothes faster than washing by hand.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih jelas dan logis dengan menggunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan kondisi kapan Anda membaca instruksi.

範例: If I am familiar with the machine, I usually don't read the instructions. However, if it's a new machine, I make sure to read the manual carefully before using it.

建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik namun ada beberapa kesalahan pengucapan dan pengulangan kata. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lancar dan menggunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan kondisi dengan lebih jelas.

範例: I think it depends on the machine. If I am familiar with it, I don't need to read the manual. But if it's a new machine and I don't know how to use it, I always read the instructions carefully.

× My favorite machine in my home is a washing machine because it can help me to wash my clothes but I don't have because my husband have an about me washing machine so I really need it so I can wash my my clothes every single day.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a washing machine because it can help me wash my clothes but I don't have one because my husband has a washing machine for me so I really need it so I can wash my clothes every single day.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'my husband'. Also, 'an about me washing machine' is unclear and corrected to 'a washing machine for me'. The phrase 'help me to wash' is better as 'help me wash'. The sentence also needed 'one' after 'don't have' to indicate the object.

× I don't really think that that's a those are important, but for assembly, I think it's effective, effective for no days, Yeah.

✓ I don't really think that those are important, but for assembly, I think it's effective, effective for nowadays, yeah.

The phrase 'that's a those are' is incorrect; 'those are' is correct for plural. 'No days' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'nowadays'. Subject-verb agreement is corrected by removing 'that's a'.

× If I am familiar with that machine, I I don't really need to read the instruction, but if I ever used the machine I don't need. To read the instruction.

✓ If I am familiar with that machine, I don't really need to read the instructions, but if I have never used the machine, I need to read the instructions.

The pronoun 'ever' is incorrectly used; 'have never' is appropriate for past experience. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× It depends on the machine. If our familiar familiar with the machine, of course. Yeah, I don't need to raise the manual because I already know how to operate it. But yeah, if it's a new machine an I do know how to operate it, so I need to read the instruction.

✓ It depends on the machine. If we are familiar with the machine, of course, I don't need to read the manual because I already know how to operate it. But yeah, if it's a new machine and I don't know how to operate it, I need to read the instructions.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect; it should be 'we are'. 'Raise the manual' is incorrect; it should be 'read the manual'. 'An I do know' is corrected to 'and I don't know'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.