机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议你练习使用简单且正确的句子结构，避免重复和错误的词汇使用。可以先用简单句表达观点，再用具体例子支持。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I enjoy watching shows with my friends. For example, we often watch fashion programs together in the living room.

建議: 你的回答不连贯且含糊，缺乏具体内容。建议你直接回答问题，并用简单明了的句子表达你的观点，提供具体原因或例子来支持你的观点。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help save time and make cleaning easier at home.

建議: 你的回答语法混乱，表达不清楚。建议你练习用简单句子直接回答问题，并说明原因。避免使用不正确的词汇和句型。

範例: No, I usually do not read the instructions because I find it difficult. I prefer to learn by trying to use the machine.

建議: 你的回答不连贯且含糊，缺乏逻辑。建议你明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。练习使用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: No, I don't think it is very important because my family members usually help me when I use new machines. For example, my father often shows me how to operate them.

× My favorite Martian is TV because I already wear my friend watching TV in my home.

✓ My favorite machine is the TV because I often watch TV with my friend at home.

原句中“wear”用错，应为“watch”，且“already wear my friend watching TV”结构混乱，正确表达应为“often watch TV with my friend”。动词-ing形式使用错误，需改为正确的动词形式。

× For example, I I already watching about sparse fashion shoot in my in my in my home care home.

✓ For example, I have already watched a sparse fashion show at my home.

原句中“already watching”时态和结构错误，应使用完成时“have already watched”，且“sparse fashion shoot”表达不清，改为“sparse fashion show”。

× Is that teacher, sorry, I don't know.

✓ Sorry, I don't know.

句子结构混乱，“Is that teacher”无意义，应删除，保持简洁表达。

× I don't know more Sheen be 'cause I don't see already, uh, to, uh, to housework here in my home.

✓ I don't know more because I haven't done much housework at home.

原句中“see already, uh, to, uh, to housework”结构混乱，动词形式错误，应使用完成时态表达未做过家务。

× I don't know to reading because I don't like watching a lot of winds up because I can I can watching a lot of washing.

✓ I don't like reading instructions because I can watch a lot of washing machines in action.

“I don't know to reading”错误，应为“I don't like reading”；“watching a lot of winds up”表达不清，改为“watch a lot of washing machines in action”。

× So I I don't can watch E.

✓ So I can't watch it.

“don't can”是错误的情态动词用法，应直接用“can't”。

× No, because I already, uh, already friendly, uh.

✓ No, because I am already familiar with it.

“already friendly”用词错误，应为“already familiar”，形容词使用错误。

× Running all other people to help me, for example, I already, uh, my father, you already kind of hype me to use the your state.

✓ Other people help me, for example, my father has already helped me to use it.

原句结构混乱，“Running all other people”不合语法，应改为“Other people help me”；“you already kind of hype me”表达错误，应为“has already helped me”。