机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear and relevant response about a specific machine in your home. Use simple and correct English to express your idea.

範例: My favourite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes quickly and easily.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Please try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and make household chores easier for everyone.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not directly answer the question. Please give a straightforward response and explain why you do or do not read instructions.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and safely.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand. Please try to express your opinion clearly and provide reasons why reading instructions is important.

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because it helps us understand how to operate the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

× Almost every ship.

✓ Almost every machine.

The student likely meant to say 'machine' instead of 'ship' to answer the question about favourite machine. 'Ship' is unrelated and incorrect in this context.

× Yeah, I think this weekend I certainly feels very important for the four people PC then this to my son can have people save alot of time anymore.

✓ Yeah, I think this washing machine is certainly very important for the four people in my family because it helps my son and others save a lot of time.

The original sentence has subject-verb disagreement ('I certainly feels'), unclear phrasing, and incorrect word usage. The correction aligns the verb with the subject and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, of course I will fall in love or let me know about that.

✓ Yes, of course I will read the instructions or let me know about them.

The original sentence misuses 'fall in love' and is unclear. The correction uses appropriate modal verb 'will' with the verb 'read' to express future intention and clarifies the object.

× Yes, I placed in this picture is pointing at fault in this part of the understand how to operate the system employed in continuously.

✓ Yes, the picture points out the fault in this part, helping me understand how to operate the system continuously.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.