机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时句子不够连贯，存在断句问题，影响表达的自然流畅。建议练习连贯表达，避免句子碎片化，同时增加具体细节丰富内容。

範例: My favorite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner, which I bought about two years ago. Since then, it has made cleaning much easier and faster because it can clean automatically without much effort from me.

建議: 回答中存在断句和语法错误，且内容不够具体。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，并提供更具体的理由和细节。

範例: Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help me clean my home efficiently. For example, they save me a lot of time and keep my house tidy every day.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和断句问题，影响表达的准确性。建议注意语法结构，使用完整句子，并适当扩展内容。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and avoid any mistakes.

建議: 回答较为完整，但存在断句问题，影响流畅性。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子更自然。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps you understand how to operate it properly and avoid making mistakes.

× It was bought about two years ago and since then.

✓ It was bought about two years ago, and since then,

句子结构不完整，'and since then'后面缺少内容，应该用逗号连接，表示时间状语。

× It has. Made cleaning much easier and faster.

✓ It has made cleaning much easier and faster.

句子被错误地拆分成两部分，应该合并为一句完整句子。

× I especially like it because it can clean.

✓ I especially like it because it can clean well.

句子不完整，'clean'后缺少宾语或副词，补充副词使句子完整。

× These machines can. Help me. To clean my home.

✓ These machines can help me to clean my home.

句子被错误拆分，应合并为一句完整句子。

× I especially like them because. This saves me a lot of time and keeps the horse tidy every day.

✓ I especially like them because this saves me a lot of time and keeps the house tidy every day.

句子被错误拆分，且'hose'应为'house'，合并句子并纠正拼写错误。

× before I using a machine.

✓ before I use a machine.

'before'后应接动词原形或主语+动词原形，'using'用法错误，应改为'use'。

× I always read the instructions so that I can use them. Correctly.

✓ I always read the instructions so that I can use them correctly.

'correctly'不应单独成句，应与前句合并。

× Yes, I think. It is very important to read the instructions before using any machine or reading the user menu.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine or reading the user manual.

句子被错误拆分，'user menu'应为'user manual'，合并句子并纠正词汇。

× You can understand how to operate it properly and. Avoid making mistakes.

✓ You can understand how to operate it properly and avoid making mistakes.

句子被错误拆分，应合并为一句完整句子。