机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的清晰度。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the computer because I use it for work and entertainment. When I was a child, I liked watching TV after school as it was my daily habit.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且内容重复。建议使用连词连接句子，明确表达观点，并提供具体理由。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort in daily chores, allowing us to focus on other activities.

建議: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，句子不完整。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并说明原因。

範例: Actually, I usually do not read the instructions because many machines are easy to use. I prefer to try them out myself first.

建議: 回答表达不清，语法错误多，逻辑不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps us use the machine correctly and avoid damage.

× I think nowadays computer may because it's becoming my favorite machine in home.

✓ I think nowadays the computer may be my favorite machine at home.

句中缺少情态动词后面的动词不定式，正确用法是'may be'。此外，'computer'前应加定冠词'the'，'in home'应为'at home'。

× But when I was a child charge to children, I think TV is my favorite machine at home.

✓ But when I was a child, I think TV was my favorite machine at home.

句中'tv is'时态应与过去时间状语一致，改为'was'。另外，'charge to children'无意义，应删除。

× I always watching TV after school.

✓ I always watch TV after school.

'always'后应使用动词原形，不能用现在分词'watching'。

× I think a washing machines and the sweeping machines are very helpful for our life living becauses the everyday you always have so many things to wash and sweeping the floor and sweeping the battery is also takes some much time of you.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very helpful for our daily life because every day you always have so many things to wash and sweep the floor, and sweeping the balcony also takes a lot of your time.

'a washing machines'中冠词与复数名词不匹配，应去掉'a'。'life living'表达不正确，应为'daily life'。'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。'sweeping the battery'应为'sweeping the balcony'。'takes some much time of you'表达不自然，应为'takes a lot of your time'。

× I think I would like to say actually no, because some machines for me is just a easy to deal with.

✓ I think I would like to say actually no, because some machines for me are just easy to deal with.

'some machines'为复数，谓语动词应使用'are'。'a easy'中'a'与以元音音素开头的形容词'easy'不搭配，应去掉冠词。

× I think when I get it, I can always turn out and use it.

✓ I think when I get it, I can always turn it on and use it.

'turn out'用法错误，正确表达应为'turn it on'表示打开机器。

× It's very easy and I think it is the best thing for our.

✓ It's very easy and I think it is the best thing for us.

'for our'缺少名词，正确表达应为'for us'。

× I think it may be because if there's you follow the instructions to use the machine of maybe you can use it more time for more time and some commissions and other details would be more clear.

✓ I think it may be important because if you follow the instructions to use the machine, maybe you can use it longer and some functions and other details would be clearer.

'there's you follow'结构错误，应为'if you follow'。'use it more time for more time'表达不自然，应为'use it longer'。'commissions'应为'functions'。'would be more clear'应改为比较级'clearer'。