机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks natural flow. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the machine and why you like it.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the Samsung washing machine I recently borrowed. It's fully automated, which makes it very easy to use because it only requires following a few simple instructions.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affect the naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear opinion, and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner.

範例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they help us complete daily chores quickly and save a lot of time and energy.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural sentences, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid any misuse.

建議: Your answer is on topic but has grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it teaches us the basic and simple ways to operate machines, making it easier and more efficient to use them.

× My favorite machine at my home is washing machine.

✓ My favorite machine at my home is a washing machine.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'washing machine'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'a' is appropriate because it refers to one washing machine in general.

× Recently I have borrowed a new washing machine which is of Samsung company.

✓ Recently I have borrowed a new washing machine which is from Samsung company.

The phrase 'which is of Samsung company' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate origin or manufacturer. Also, 'Samsung company' is better expressed as 'the Samsung company' or simply 'Samsung'.

× It is fully automated washing machine and it requires only a few of instructions for its operation and I can use it more easily by following some of the instructions.

✓ It is a fully automated washing machine and it requires only a few instructions for its operation, and I can use it more easily by following some of the instructions.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'fully automated washing machine'. Also, 'a few of instructions' should be 'a few instructions' because 'instructions' is plural and does not need 'of' here.

× I guess I think of these machines are very in accessory as they are used in our daily task to do our work and.

✓ I guess I think these machines are very necessary as they are used in our daily tasks to do our work.

The phrase 'very in accessory' is incorrect. The correct adjective is 'necessary' to express importance. Also, 'daily task' should be plural 'daily tasks' to match the context.

× We should know how to operate them. Which helps us to save a lot of time and energy.

✓ We should know how to operate them, which helps us to save a lot of time and energy.

The second sentence 'Which helps us...' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma to form a complete sentence.

× Now what is it is an accessory to have a washing machine at home?

✓ Now, is it an accessory to have a washing machine at home?

The sentence has redundant words 'is it is' and incorrect word order. The correct question form is 'Is it an accessory to have a washing machine at home?'

× Yes definitely. I read instructions before using any type of machine becaused by reading the instructions I get to know about the basic rules of how to operate the machine and it can prevent the any kind of missile use of the machine and.

✓ Yes, definitely. I read instructions before using any type of machine because by reading the instructions I get to know the basic rules of how to operate the machine and it can prevent any kind of misuse of the machine.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'the any kind of missile use' is incorrect; it should be 'any kind of misuse'. The sentence also ends abruptly and needs to be completed properly.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instructions are as By reading the instructions so one can get to know about the basic and simple methods of how to operate the machine and after getting know about the instructions 1 can easily operate any kind of machine with less efforts and.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because by reading them one can learn the basic and simple methods of how to operate the machine, and after knowing the instructions, one can easily operate any kind of machine with less effort.

The sentence has several errors: 'are as' is incorrect and should be 'because'; 'getting know' should be 'knowing'; '1' should be 'one'; 'less efforts' should be 'less effort'. The sentence also ends abruptly and needs proper punctuation.