机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“she can help me to watch my closest”应为“it helps me wash my clothes”。建议注意主谓一致和正确使用动词，同时避免重复和冗余。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash my clothes quickly and easily. I find it very convenient since I dislike doing housework. It is simple to operate and saves me a lot of time.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，且逻辑混乱。建议理清思路，使用连词连接观点，并提供具体理由。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines are very important because they help us clean clothes efficiently. However, sweeping machines are less essential for me since I don't mind a bit of dirt and don't feel the need to sweep every day.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

範例: I usually don't read the instructions because nowadays machines are designed to be very user-friendly. However, if I can't find a specific function, I will check the instructions and follow them carefully.

建議: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连词使句子连贯。

範例: I don't think it is very important to read instructions carefully because usually we just need to make the machines work. Most of the time, we can operate them without instructions, even if we make small mistakes. So, I believe trying by ourselves is fine.

× I I think it's washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so she can help me to watch my closest and is very convenient.

✓ I think it's the washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so it can help me to wash my clothes and is very convenient.

这里“washing machine”前缺少定冠词“the”，且“closest”应为“clothes”，表示复数衣服。还用错了代词“she”，应使用“it”指代机器。

× I think it's washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so she can help me to watch my closest and is very convenient.

✓ I think it's the washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so it can help me to wash my clothes and is very convenient.

“washing machine”前应加定冠词“the”，因为特指家里的洗衣机。

× I think it's washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so she can help me to watch my closest and is very convenient.

✓ I think it's the washing machine because I'm a very lazy person and I hate doing housework so it can help me to wash my clothes and is very convenient.

“closest”拼写错误，应为“clothes”，表示复数衣服。

× It's easy to use so I think it's a best discovery.

✓ It's easy to use so I think it's the best discovery.

“a best”用法错误，最高级前应使用定冠词“the”。

× Yes, I seen washing machine is very important because I need to wash my clothes is it cannot be a bird causes to go outside, but sweeping machines is just so so because.

✓ Yes, I see washing machines are very important because I need to wash my clothes; it cannot be done by hand easily, but sweeping machines are just so-so because.

“seen”应为现在时“see”，与后文时态一致；“washing machine”应为复数“washing machines”；“is”应改为“are”以符合复数主语；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yes, I seen washing machine is very important because I need to wash my clothes is it cannot be a bird causes to go outside, but sweeping machines is just so so because.

✓ Yes, I see washing machines are very important because I need to wash my clothes; it cannot be done by hand easily, but sweeping machines are just so-so because.

“washing machine”应为复数形式“washing machines”，与后文“sweeping machines”保持一致。

× Yes, I seen washing machine is very important because I need to wash my clothes is it cannot be a bird causes to go outside, but sweeping machines is just so so because.

✓ Yes, I see washing machines are very important because I need to wash my clothes; it cannot be done by hand easily, but sweeping machines are just so-so because.

“a bird causes to go outside”语义不清，可能是错误表达，应改为“it cannot be done by hand easily”，更符合语境。

× but sweeping machines is just so so because.

✓ but sweeping machines are just so-so because.

“sweeping machines”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× I can live in dirt, I do not need you sweep it all days.

✓ I can live with dirt, I do not need to sweep it all day.

“live in dirt”应为“live with dirt”，表示“忍受脏”；“you sweep”应为“不定式to sweep”；“all days”应为“all day”，表示整天。

× I think no I always through the instructions because this days up the.

✓ I think no, I always skip the instructions because these days the

“through the instructions”用法错误，应为“skip the instructions”表示不看说明书；“this days”应为“these days”，表示现在的时间。

× I think no I always through the instructions because this days up the.

✓ I think no, I always skip the instructions because these days the

句子结构混乱，缺少标点和完整表达，应分句并补充完整。

× because this days up the. Machines are always designing, very convenient and easy to use.

✓ because these days the machines are always designed to be very convenient and easy to use.

“this days”应为“these days”；“up the”无意义，应删除；“machines are always designing”应为被动语态“machines are always designed”。

× But if it's necessary, like I cannot find a specific functions, I will find out the instructions and follow it.

✓ But if it's necessary, like I cannot find a specific function, I will look up the instructions and follow them.

“a specific functions”数量不一致，应为“a specific function”；“find out the instructions”用法错误，应为“look up the instructions”；“follow it”指代复数“instructions”，应为“follow them”。

× But if it's necessary, like I cannot find a specific functions, I will find out the instructions and follow it.

✓ But if it's necessary, like I cannot find a specific function, I will look up the instructions and follow them.

“instructions”是复数，代词应使用“them”而非“it”。

× I don't see that is. So important to read it carefully be 'cause only since we need to do is made the machines works.

✓ I don't think it is so important to read it carefully because all we need to do is make the machines work.

“see that is”表达错误，应为“think it is”；“made the machines works”时态和语态错误，应为“make the machines work”。

× I don't see that is. So important to read it carefully be 'cause only since we need to do is made the machines works.

✓ I don't think it is so important to read it carefully because all we need to do is make the machines work.

“be 'cause only since”用法错误，应为“because all”。

× And I think that in most times we can do it without instructions, even with some small mistakes nap.

✓ And I think that most of the time we can do it without instructions, even with some small mistakes.

“nap”无意义，应删除；“in most times”应为“most of the time”。

× So I think try them, it will be fine.

✓ So I think if we try, it will be fine.

句子结构不完整，应补充条件状语“if we try”。