机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using complete sentences and linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Avoid incomplete phrases and unclear words.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I usually watch the news to stay informed. Also, sometimes I watch movies on it for entertainment.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us save time and reduce physical effort when cleaning the house.

建議: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using complete sentences and explaining your habits clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Actually, I don't usually read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to watch YouTube videos to learn how to use it.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally by using complete sentences and correct word order. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps us understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

× The TV still my favorite machine in my home.

✓ The TV is still my favorite machine in my home.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and the complement. In English, sentences need a verb to be complete. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× I think I usually use it for watch news and.

✓ I think I usually use it to watch news.

After 'use it to', the verb should be in the base form, not 'for watch'. Also, 'for' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition before the verb. The sentence is corrected to use 'to watch'.

× Know about? Yes.

✓ To know about the news? Yes.

The phrase 'Know about?' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'To know about the news?' makes it a proper question or statement, clarifying the meaning.

× Sometimes we use it to watch movies also.

✓ Sometimes we use it to watch movies as well.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end for natural English usage. No plural issue here, but improving clarity.

× What's your mission in simulations?

✓ What is your opinion on washing machines?

The original sentence is unclear and does not fit the context. It seems to be a mishearing or miswriting. Correcting to a relevant question about washing machines.

× But I want important.

✓ But I think they are important.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb to express the idea properly. Adding 'I think they are' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Oh. That helps.

✓ Oh, they help.

The sentence is fragmented. Changing 'That helps' to 'they help' refers correctly to machines and forms a complete sentence.

× It tells us to reduce overtime.

✓ They help us reduce overtime.

'It' is singular but refers to machines (plural). Also, 'tells us to reduce overtime' is awkward. Correcting to 'They help us reduce overtime' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Actually I don't do that before I use that machine.

✓ Actually, I don't do that before I use the machine.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing a comma after 'Actually'. Also, 'that machine' is better as 'the machine' for specificity.

× I was some YouTube videos about the message.

✓ I watched some YouTube videos about the machine.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I was some YouTube videos' is incorrect. Correcting to 'I watched some YouTube videos' makes sense.

× Oh yes, I do.

✓ Oh yes, I do.

This sentence is correct and needs no change.

× We should know how to work that items.

✓ We should know how to operate those items.

'Work that items' is incorrect. The verb 'work' is not used transitively here. 'Operate' is the correct verb, and 'those' matches plural 'items'.

× Before using.

✓ Before using them.

The phrase 'Before using.' is incomplete. Adding 'them' clarifies the object of 'using'.

× So we want to know instruction before is that items.

✓ So we want to know the instructions before using those items.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting word order and articles makes it clear and grammatical.