机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I often feel too lazy to wash dishes by hand, so this machine is very helpful. Moreover, it uses less water compared to washing dishes manually, which is environmentally friendly.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ nối hợp lý và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Đồng thời, cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục.

範例: I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in our daily lives. As people become busier and want to save time, these machines make household chores easier and more efficient. For example, a washing machine can clean clothes quickly, allowing us to focus on other tasks.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do của mình một cách mạch lạc.

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I find it easy to understand how to operate it. Reading the manual often takes a lot of time, so I prefer to learn by trying it out myself.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm rõ ý hơn.

範例: I think reading instructions is important, especially when the machine is complicated. However, if I am familiar with the device, I usually don't read the manual because I can figure out how to use it easily. So, it depends on the situation.

× Well, my favorite machine at home is my dishwasher machine which is really important why I will lazy to clean the dishes by hand and of course that.

✓ Well, my favorite machine at home is my dishwasher machine, which is really important because I am lazy to clean the dishes by hand, of course.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'why' as a conjunction. The correct conjunction to explain reason is 'because'. Also, 'I will lazy' is incorrect; it should be 'I am lazy'. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and correcting conjunctions.

× It doesn't cause a lot of water, so I often use from this dishwasher machine to clean pads.

✓ It doesn't use a lot of water, so I often use this dishwasher machine to clean plates.

The phrase 'cause a lot of water' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'use' when referring to water consumption. Also, 'use from' is incorrect; 'use' does not require 'from'. 'Pads' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'plates'.

× Well, I think that washing machine answering machines are really important to life as we wanna getting lazier an getting busier in their life.

✓ Well, I think that washing machines and sweeping machines are really important in life as we want to get lazier and busier in our lives.

The original sentence has singular/plural confusion: 'washing machine answering machines' is unclear and likely meant 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. Also, 'wanna getting' is incorrect; it should be 'want to get'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Their life' should be 'our lives' to match the subject.

× Which these things can easier too.

✓ These things can make life easier too.

The original sentence is a fragment starting with 'Which' and lacks a main verb. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject and verb, improving clarity.

× Do and you can connect it everywhere you can.

✓ You can use and connect them everywhere you want.

The phrase 'Do and you can connect it' is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects pronoun usage and verb form.

× So I think that washing machines and shipping machines are really important in life.

✓ So I think that washing machines and sweeping machines are really important in life.

'Shipping machines' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'sweeping machines'. The correction fixes the noun to the intended meaning.

× Hello using the machine because I think that I can know it quite clearly as well as I can and also that.

✓ I don't usually read the instructions before using the machine because I think I understand it quite clearly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning.

× Being a trash before using machine cost me a lot of time so I usually don't read it.

✓ Reading the instructions before using the machine takes a lot of time, so I usually don't read them.

'Being a trash' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'reading the instructions'. Also, 'cost me a lot of time' is better expressed as 'takes a lot of time'. 'Machine' needs the article 'the'. 'It' should be 'them' referring to instructions.

× Well, I think it's really important to instructions, but I usually don't read instructions before using a machine because I think I understand how to use it quite easily.

✓ Well, I think reading instructions is really important, but I usually don't read them before using a machine because I think I understand how to use it quite easily.

The phrase 'important to instructions' is incorrect; it should be 'important to read instructions' or 'reading instructions is important'. Also, 'instructions' should be referred to as 'them' in the second clause for clarity.

× Well, it depends on if you know it or not, So yeah.

✓ Well, it depends on whether you know how to use it or not, so yeah.

The original sentence is informal and incomplete. The correction adds 'whether' and clarifies the object of 'know' to improve sentence structure.

× If you don't know so, you can try to read instructions if the machine looks so complicated.

✓ If you don't know how to use it, you can try to read the instructions if the machine looks complicated.

The phrase 'If you don't know so' is incorrect; it should be 'If you don't know how to use it'. Also, 'read instructions' needs the article 'the'. 'Looks so complicated' is better as 'looks complicated'.