机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，使用完整句子，并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用更清晰的句子表达喜欢的机器及原因。

範例: My favourite machine at home is a robot that helps me sweep the floor and wash my clothes because doing housework is very tiring for me, so I hope the robot can handle these tasks.

建議: 回答中表达不清晰，有语法和词汇错误，逻辑不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help reduce my workload and keep my home clean, which makes my life easier.

建議: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰地说明阅读说明书的原因。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly and improves efficiency.

建議: 回答简短且表达不够自然。建议扩展回答，使用更自然的表达方式，并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they guide me on how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

× Is a robot that can help me to sweep the floor or a wash my clothes.

✓ It is a robot that can help me sweep the floor or wash my clothes.

句子缺少主语，应加上主语“it”。此外，“help me to sweep”中的“to”可以省略，且“a wash my clothes”结构错误，应改为“wash my clothes”。

× Is because doing housework is most tires thing for me so I hope that can be dealt with.

✓ It is because doing housework is the most tiring thing for me, so I hope it can be dealt with.

“most tires”应为“most tiring”，形容词形式错误；缺少冠词“the”；句子缺少主语“it”；“that can be dealt with”前应加主语“it”。

× Yes, they're both important because without them I will do all the housework by myself and they can reduce my task and also keep on Mike home too tightly, so I really loved him.

✓ Yes, they're both important because without them I would have to do all the housework by myself. They can reduce my tasks and also keep my home very tidy, so I really love them.

“will do”时态不合适，应使用虚拟语气“would have to do”；“task”应为复数“tasks”；“keep on Mike home too tightly”表达错误，应为“keep my home very tidy”；“loved him”时态和代词错误，应为“love them”。

× Yes, why I can't use the machine correctly? I will read instructions and I think is a good way to improve the efficiency. To help me use the machine.

✓ Yes, if I can't use the machine correctly, I will read the instructions. I think it is a good way to improve efficiency and help me use the machine.

“why I can't use”结构错误，应为“if I can't use”；“read instructions”缺少冠词，应为“read the instructions”；“I think is a good way”缺少主语，应为“I think it is a good way”；“To help me use the machine”是句子碎片，应合并为完整句子。

× Yes, because without it I can't directly use a machine to do anything, so it's very important.

✓ Yes, because without them I can't directly use a machine to do anything, so it's very important.

前文提到的是复数“machines”，此处代词应使用复数“them”，而非单数“it”。