机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子结构，注意语法，避免冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: My favorite machine at home is my coffee maker because I enjoy drinking coffee. Making coffee myself is cheaper than buying it outside, so I really like using it.

建議: 回答内容较完整，但句子稍显重复，且连接词使用不够丰富。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更连贯，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because housework is essential but time-consuming. Therefore, these machines help make our daily lives more convenient.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I don't know how to operate a new machine without them. This helps me avoid making mistakes.

建議: 回答中断断续续，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和语法，避免句子碎片化。

範例: Yes, reading instructions is very important. If you don't read them, you might use the machine incorrectly and accidentally damage it, which would be very bad.

× I think I make coffee by myself can be on cheaper then I buy 1 outside so I really like my coffee maker.

✓ I think making coffee by myself can be cheaper than buying one outside, so I really like my coffee maker.

这里's make coffee'用法不当，应该用动名词'making'表示动作，且'cheaper then'应为'cheaper than'，'1'应为'one'。句子中单复数和比较级用法错误。

× I think housework is one of the most important job in our daily life, but we don't have a lot of time to do it.

✓ I think housework is one of the most important jobs in our daily life, but we don't have a lot of time to do it.

'one of the most important job'中'job'应为复数'jobs'，因为'one of the'后面接复数名词。

× Sure, I must read instructions before I using machine because I have no idea how to use a new machine without instructions and read.

✓ Sure, I must read instructions before using a machine because I have no idea how to use a new machine without reading instructions.

'before I using machine'中应为动名词形式'before using a machine'，且缺少冠词'a'。'without instructions and read'表达不清，应改为'without reading instructions'。

× This can make me stop. Away from the making mistakes.

✓ This can help me avoid making mistakes.

原句结构混乱，'stop away from the making mistakes'不符合英语表达习惯，应简化为'help me avoid making mistakes'。

× if you didn't read the instructions before use the machine, you might. Use the machines by a wrong way and. Maybe you could accidentally damage this machine and this really bad?

✓ If you don't read the instructions before using the machine, you might use the machine in the wrong way and maybe accidentally damage it, which is really bad.

'before use the machine'应为'before using the machine'，'by a wrong way'应为'in the wrong way'，句子断句错误，且'this really bad?'表达不完整，应改为'which is really bad'。