机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and clear, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with word choice (e.g., 'hymns' should be 'homes').

範例: My favorite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner. I recently bought it because it helps me clean the floors easily and saves a lot of time. In my opinion, it's one of the best inventions for household chores.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several errors. Focus on forming complete sentences, using correct vocabulary, and linking your ideas logically. For example, explain why these machines are important in a busy life and avoid confusing phrases.

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in today's fast-paced life. Since many people have busy jobs, these machines help save time and make household chores easier.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and connect your ideas clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions when I use a new machine. If I don't know how to operate it, reading the manual helps me use it correctly and safely.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more complete sentences and linking words. Also, try to provide a reason or example to support your opinion.

範例: Absolutely, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine. This way, we can understand how to operate it properly and avoid accidents.

× Recently I bought a robot for vacuum cleaning.

✓ Recently, I bought a robot for vacuum cleaning.

A comma is needed after 'Recently' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× I think it is necessary for all of hymns because.

✓ I think it is necessary for all of us because.

The word 'hymns' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'us' to refer to people in general.

× I think it is necessary for all of hymns because.

✓ I think it is necessary for all of us because it helps with chores.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because'. Adding a reason completes the sentence.

× By using that you can do your chores easily and actually easier than before and I think one of the best things that people created.

✓ By using it, you can do your chores easily and actually more easily than before, and I think it is one of the best things that people have created.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and missing words. 'That' should be 'it', 'easier' should be 'more easily' as an adverb, and 'people created' should be 'people have created' for correct tense.

× In this technology called wife and speed.

✓ In this technology-driven life and speed.

The phrase 'wife and speed' is incorrect; it should be 'life and speed' to make sense in context.

× Speedy life, yes, of currents of washing machines and shaping machines or so crucial because all of us have job to do and we have no time about doing our chores like washing dishes.

✓ In a speedy life, yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are so crucial because all of us have jobs to do and no time to do chores like washing dishes.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'of currents of' is incorrect and removed; 'shaping machines' should be 'sweeping machines'; 'or so crucial' corrected to 'are so crucial'; 'have job' corrected to 'have jobs'; 'no time about doing' corrected to 'no time to do'.

× If it is new to me and.

✓ If it is new to me and I don't know how to use it,

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; it should be combined with the next clause for completeness.

× I don't know how to use it.

✓ I don't know how to use it, yes, of course, I read all the instructions and use it perfectly.

This sentence should be connected to the previous one to form a complete thought.

× So yes, when I buy something you I prefer new all things about it.

✓ So yes, when I buy something new, I prefer to know all about it.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and awkward phrasing; 'you I prefer new all things about it' is incorrect and corrected to a clearer expression.

× Absolutely yes. In my opinion, it is crucial to know about instructions and how to use it.

✓ Absolutely yes. In my opinion, it is crucial to know the instructions and how to use them.

'Instructions' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× So when we found out how to use it perfectly, we can. Actually use it safely.

✓ So when we find out how to use it perfectly, we can actually use it safely.

The sentence is fragmented and has tense inconsistency; 'found' changed to 'find' to match present tense, and the sentence combined for clarity.