机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并避免重复。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me time washing dishes, allowing me to spend more time on social media.

建議: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

範例: Absolutely. For most people, these machines save time, which allows us to do what we want. Moreover, they help disabled people complete household chores more easily.

建議: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，清晰表达观点。

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions before using a machine is very important. It not only ensures our safety but also helps us use the machine more efficiently.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，增强逻辑连贯性。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions. They provide detailed information on how to use machines safely and effectively.

× My favorite machine, my home is dishwasher because it can't waste me anytime on washing dishes and the time I say I can spend more time on watching the social media.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it doesn't waste my time washing dishes, and the time I save I can spend more on watching social media.

这里“dishwasher”前缺少冠词“the”，且“waste me anytime”表达错误，应为“waste my time”。“the time I say”应为“the time I save”。“the social media”中“the”不必要，应为“social media”。这些都是单复数和冠词使用错误。

× Absolutely. For normal people, these machines can save our times and this times we can do what we want.

✓ Absolutely. For normal people, these machines can save our time and this time we can do what we want.

“times”应为不可数名词“time”，表示时间，不用复数形式。

× And for the disabled people it can help them to do some chores.

✓ And for disabled people, it can help them do some chores.

“the disabled people”中“the”可省略，且“help them to do”中“to”可省略，符合习惯用法。

× Yes, I think with the instruction before using the machine is very important.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions before using the machine is very important.

原句结构不完整，“with the instruction before using the machine”缺少主语，需改为“reading the instructions before using the machine”使句子完整。

× It can turn all, it can not only. Uh, make us. Be safe William using machine but also can give us more efficiency with by using the machine.

✓ It can not only make us safe when using the machine but also give us more efficiency when using it.

原句断句错误，语序混乱，需调整为连贯句子，去除多余词汇，正确表达“不仅让我们使用机器时更安全，还能提高效率”。

× Instructions can give us so many details on how to use the machines, which can ensure our safety by using machine and also can.

✓ Instructions can give us many details on how to use the machines, which can ensure our safety when using the machines and also can.

“so many details”改为“many details”更自然；“by using machine”缺少冠词，应为“when using the machines”。

× Give me more information. See we are using this machine.

✓ They also give me more information about how we are using this machine.

原句断句不完整，缺少主语和连贯性，需合并为完整句子表达清楚意思。