机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，句子结构混乱，无法准确传达你的意思。建议你在回答时先明确主题句，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免语法错误和无关内容。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently.

建議: 你的回答表达不清，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并用具体理由支持你的观点。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort when doing household chores.

建議: 你的回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清楚。建议你用完整的句子直接回答问题，并说明原因，保持语言简洁自然。

範例: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I am familiar with how to operate most devices.

建議: 你的回答语法和表达混乱，难以理解。建议你明确表达自己的观点，并用简单的句子说明理由，避免重复和错误。

範例: No, I don't think it is always important to read the instructions because many machines are easy to use and similar to others I have used before.

× I forwarded on my shoe. Is, I said, focusing in my home. Kurt because it can. Is it can? Keep cable visible. Free shipping. So I figured the machine you.

✓ I focused on my shoe. I said, focusing in my home because it can keep the cable visible and free shipping. So I figured the machine you.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整的句子。建议理清句子逻辑，使用完整句子表达意思。

× Yes, the I think a washing machines under spraying machine is very important because why?

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because...

名词单复数使用错误，washing machines和sweeping machines应保持一致的复数形式。

× Why I was tired. I can't undermine my parents. Les Main washing washing clothes on the spray and spray icon.

✓ Because I was tired, I can't help my parents wash clothes by hand.

句子结构不完整且混乱，建议使用完整句子表达因果关系。

× No, I don't have it as a instructions before using on mission messing.

✓ No, I don't read the instructions before using the machine.

冠词使用错误，instructions前应使用复数形式且不加不定冠词a。

× Because I seem fairly regular instructions user. Oh. Wait is over time? So I don't.

✓ Because I am a fairly regular user of instructions. Oh, wait, over time? So I don't.

句子结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，建议理清句子结构。

× No, I think the it's not important to redo their instructions because every every machine several different use yours.

✓ No, I think it's not important to read the instructions because every machine has several different uses.

代词使用错误，their和yours使用不当，应使用正确的指代词。

× I I can't study. It's.

✓ I can't study it.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，建议补充完整句子。