机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and clear. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of saying 'it's also it's help', say 'it helps me'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't have many machines at home, but I would like to buy a coffee machine because it helps me make coffee easily every day, which is more convenient than buying it outside.

建議: Your answer has many grammar and clarity issues. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: In my opinion, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help clean the house efficiently and save a lot of time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me assemble it correctly and understand how to use it properly.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I believe it is important to read instructions before using household machines because they provide important information on how to use them safely and effectively.

× we don't have various kind of technology or machine at our home

✓ we don't have various kinds of technology or machines at our home

The phrase 'various kind' is incorrect; it should be 'various kinds' because 'various' implies multiple types, so the plural form 'kinds' is needed. Also, 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to match 'various kinds'.

× it's also it's help

✓ it also helps

The phrase 'it's also it's help' is incorrect. 'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' or 'it has', but here the verb 'help' needs to be conjugated as 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the repetition 'it's' is unnecessary.

× As to consume a coffee in a daily basis

✓ to consume coffee on a daily basis

The phrase 'As to consume a coffee in a daily basis' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' for purpose, and 'on a daily basis' is the correct expression for frequency. Also, 'a coffee' should be 'coffee' as an uncountable noun here.

× it's way easier than buying

✓ it's way easier than buying one

The sentence is incomplete; 'buying' needs an object. Adding 'one' clarifies the comparison.

× in my individuals opinions I. Teen got missing washing machine and misleading machine are important because it's help

✓ in my individual opinion, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help

The phrase contains multiple errors: 'individuals opinions' should be 'individual opinion' (singular), 'I. Teen got missing' is unclear and likely meant to be 'I think', 'washing machine and misleading machine' should be 'washing machines and sweeping machines' (correct terms and plural), and 'it's help' should be 'they help' to agree with plural subject.

× it's help. Do. Modernize your home and it's also help you to clean your home, house or and it's also time saving and it's helped a lot too

✓ they help modernize your home and they also help you to clean your house, and they also save time and have helped a lot too

The pronoun 'it's' (it is) is incorrectly used for plural subjects; 'they' should be used. Also, 'home, house or' is redundant; 'house' suffices. The verb forms are adjusted for agreement and clarity.

× because it's help help to assemble mentions mentioned in your household

✓ because it helps to assemble machines mentioned in your household

'it's help help' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps'. 'mentions mentioned' is likely a mistake for 'machines mentioned'. The verb 'helps' agrees with singular subject 'it'.

× So and you can learn and how to use mission properly and use it. Use it in a mechanism mechanical way

✓ so you can learn how to use machines properly and use them in a mechanical way

'mission' should be 'machines'. 'Use it' is repeated unnecessarily. 'them' is the correct pronoun for plural 'machines'.

× And it's helped a lot and it's in instruction. Instruction it had many kind of different

✓ and it helps a lot. Instructions have many different kinds

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' for present tense. 'Instruction it had many kind of different' is incorrect; it should be 'Instructions have many different kinds' to be grammatically correct and clear.