机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜好和原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意语法正确性，避免使用口语缩写如"ETC"，并用连词使句子更连贯。

範例: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it is very useful. I can do many things on it, such as contacting my friends and searching for information online.

建議: 回答内容基本符合要求，但句子结构不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然，同时注意主谓一致和代词使用。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us do regular housework more easily, so they play a crucial role in our home.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够正式且有语法错误。建议避免口语化表达，使用更准确的时态和句式，并用连词连接句子。

範例: Actually, I am often too lazy to read the instructions when I receive a new machine. I don't usually read them, even though I know I should.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it can help prevent mistakes and reduce risks when using a machine.

× It is multifunction know and I could do so many things on it.

✓ It is multifunctional now and I can do so many things on it.

原句中“multifunction know”是错误的表达，应为“multifunctional now”，表示“多功能的”。此外，“could”在此处表达现在能力不合适，应使用“can”。

× I could contact with my friends, I could search information.

✓ I can contact my friends, I can search for information.

动词“contact”后不需要介词“with”，直接加宾语即可。动词“search”后应加介词“for”表示“搜索某物”。

× I could contact with my friends, I could search information.

✓ I can contact my friends, I can search for information.

此处描述现在能力，使用“could”不合适，应使用“can”表示现在的能力。

× except doing it ourself.

✓ except doing it ourselves.

反身代词“ourself”错误，正确形式为“ourselves”，用于第一人称复数。

× So. It plays a crucial role in our house.

✓ So, they play a crucial role in our house.

前文提到的是复数“washing machines and sweeping machines”，后文主语应保持复数，故用“they”而非“it”，动词用复数形式“play”。

× Actually I am too lazy to read the instructions before using a machine whenever I received a package or something with an instruction.

✓ Actually I am too lazy to read the instructions before using a machine whenever I receive a package or something with instructions.

句中描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“receive”，而非过去时“received”。

× I don't often read it.

✓ I don't often read them.

“instructions”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而非单数“it”。

× Yes, even though I really read instructions. But I do think it's important to be destructions.

✓ Yes, even though I don't really read instructions, I do think it's important to read instructions.

“even though”后不应断句，且“but”与“even though”重复使用不合适。句子应连贯表达转折关系。

× But I do think it's important to be destructions.

✓ But I do think it's important to read instructions.

“to be destructions”表达错误，应为“to read instructions”，表示“阅读说明书很重要”。

× Reading instructions before using it can prevent many. Save. T. Risk. Risks.

✓ Reading instructions before using it can prevent many risks.

原句断断续续，缺乏完整句子结构，应合并为完整句子表达完整意思。