机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不必要的词汇，同时注意时态和冠词的使用。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the TV because it creates an immersive atmosphere when I watch series and movies. It even changes the lighting according to the scenes, which makes watching more enjoyable.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复“definitely”，并且使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they improve efficiency in doing house chores. This helps people save time and energy to focus on their studies or work.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议简化句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，并且使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because new features are often added. Reading the instructions helps me use the appliance more efficiently.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达。

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they include safety information and assembly suggestions. Following these guidelines helps people use appliances more safely and efficiently.

× Actually my favorite appliance in my home.

✓ Actually, my favorite appliance in my home is the TV.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。应补充动词使句子完整。

× when I watching TV series and movies

✓ when I am watching TV series and movies

动词watch在进行时态中应使用现在分词形式，并且需要助动词am。

× this home appliance will definitely improve the efficiency tin.

✓ this home appliance will definitely improve the efficiency in

介词使用错误，应该用in表示“在……方面”。

× Doing house chores is which can help people save time and energy so that they can focus on their studies and work instead of the house chores.

✓ Doing house chores can help people save time and energy so that they can focus on their studies and work instead of the house chores.

句子中多余的关系代词which导致结构混乱，应删除。

× there are some latest an new feature had already contained in the whole appliance.

✓ there are some latest and new features already contained in the whole appliance.

名词feature应使用复数形式features，且冠词和连词使用错误。

× by learning and reading the instruction will definitely improve the efficiency of of this home appliances.

✓ learning and reading the instructions will definitely improve the efficiency of these home appliances.

句子缺少主语，且名词instruction应为复数instructions，home appliances前应使用指示代词these。

× Some instruction might include the safety instruction, but also will provide the suggestion an assembling.

✓ Some instructions might include safety instructions, and also provide suggestions on assembling.

instruction和suggestion应使用复数形式，且介词使用错误。

× Instruction and guidelines were individual to read.

✓ Instructions and guidelines are individual to read.

动词时态错误，且instruction应为复数instructions。

× Those guidelines will help individual to improve their efficiency while they are operating the home appliances.

✓ Those guidelines will help individuals to improve their efficiency while they are operating the home appliances.

individual应使用复数形式individuals，与后文的their保持一致。