耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持，同时避免重复。

範例: I am not a very patient person. For example, when I wait for important exam results, I feel anxious and find it hard to be patient.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。

範例: I feel impatient because the results are very important to me. This causes me a lot of pressure and anxiety.

建議: 回答较为完整，但用词和句式可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意语法。

範例: It depends on the activity. If I do something I enjoy, like painting, I feel excited and interested. However, if the task is boring, I get tired quickly.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，直接说明工作内容和耐心的重要性。

範例: Yes, my jobs require a lot of patience. For example, in editing, I need to carefully check every word, and in translation, I translate sentence by sentence patiently.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用简单句子表达对比，并注意时态和单复数。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now. As a child, I was often naughty and impatient, for example, I didn't like waiting for dinner or playing with friends.

× For example when I feed someone very important exam like else for me I won't be very patient to wait for my grades to shown for myself.

✓ For example, when I take a very important exam, like others do, I am not very patient to wait for my grades to be shown to me.

这里'someone very important exam'中的'exam'应该是单数形式，且表达不清晰，改为'take a very important exam'更合适。'grades to shown'缺少被动语态，应该是'grades to be shown'。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× For example when I feed someone very important exam like else for me I won't be very patient to wait for my grades to shown for myself.

✓ For example, when I take a very important exam, like others do, I am not very patient to wait for my grades to be shown to me.

'grades to shown'中'shown'应为过去分词形式，前面缺少助动词be，正确形式为'to be shown'。

× I think that may be the result is very important to me.

✓ I think that maybe the result is very important for me.

'important to me'通常表达为'important to me'，但这里更合适用'important for me'表示对我来说重要。

× So that let me feel impatient and feel anxiety and maybe I think it's very lots of pressure to me so that I feel impatient about that.

✓ So that makes me feel impatient and anxious, and maybe I think it puts a lot of pressure on me, so I feel impatient about that.

'So that let me'用法不当，应为'So that makes me'。'feel anxiety'应改为'feel anxious'，因为'anxious'是形容词。'very lots of pressure'表达错误，应为'a lot of pressure'。'pressure to me'应为'pressure on me'。

× I feel very exciting and very interested in this.

✓ I feel very excited and very interested in this.

'exciting'是形容词，表示使人兴奋的，描述事物；'excited'表示人的感受，故此处应使用'excited'。

× Nowadays my 2 jobs mainly about faces editing is very neat to patient to track the words and the opinion 1 by 1.

✓ Nowadays, my two jobs mainly involve face editing, which requires me to be very patient to track the words and opinions one by one.

'faces editing'应为'face editing'，face作为不可数名词。数字'2'应写为'two'。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Nowadays my 2 jobs mainly about faces editing is very neat to patient to track the words and the opinion 1 by 1.

✓ Nowadays, my two jobs mainly involve face editing, which requires me to be very patient to track the words and opinions one by one.

'about faces editing'用法不当，应为'involve face editing'。

× I think it's very lots of pressure to me so that I feel impatient about that.

✓ I think it puts a lot of pressure on me, so I feel impatient about that.

'very lots of'是错误搭配，应为'a lot of'。

× And another job is for translation. I have to be patient to transfer one sentence by sentence.

✓ And another job is translation. I have to be patient to translate sentence by sentence.

'for translation'改为'translation'更自然。'transfer'用错，应为'translate'。

× When I was a child I often are very naughty children and I have not very patient for like willing to eat dinner or like play with other my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I was often a very naughty child and I was not very patient, like unwilling to eat dinner or play with my friends.

'I often are very naughty children'主谓不一致，'I'是单数，'children'是复数，且动词应为'was'。'have not very patient'表达错误，应为'was not very patient'。'like willing to eat dinner'表达不清晰，改为'unwilling to eat dinner'。