耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I wasn't a patient person before I worked at a primary school because I focused mainly on my artwork. However, after joining the school, I became more patient with my students.

建議: 表达中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: I feel impatient when the Wi-Fi connection is poor because it prevents me from accessing the internet smoothly.

建議: 语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: To be honest, I feel quite stressed when I have to work on something for a long time because it requires a lot of concentration and patience. For example, when I study for exams for several hours, I find it difficult to stay focused.

建議: 句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，正确使用词汇，并确保句子完整。

範例: Absolutely. As an art teacher at a primary school, I need to be patient with my students, especially when managing their temporary disruptive behaviors in class.

建議: 时态使用不当，表达不够自然，句子结构需改进。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词。

範例: To be honest, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to do whatever I wanted without much thought. However, as an adult, I have learned to control my emotions and respond calmly.

× Before I worked in a primary school, I am not a patient person.

✓ Before I worked in a primary school, I was not a patient person.

这里描述过去的状态，应该用过去时态，'am' 应改为 'was'。

× But when I join primary school, I have more patience to students.

✓ But when I joined primary school, I had more patience with students.

'join' 应用过去式 'joined'，'patience to students' 应改为 'patience with students'，介词用法错误。

× Well, sometimes I have a terrible Wi-Fi system.

✓ Well, sometimes I had a terrible Wi-Fi system.

这里描述过去的情况，应该用过去时态 'had'。

× I feel extremely impatient about that because I feel annoyed about I couldn't use Internet.

✓ I feel extremely impatient about that because I feel annoyed that I couldn't use the Internet.

'annoyed about I couldn't use Internet' 结构不正确，应改为 'annoyed that I couldn't use the Internet'，并且 'Internet' 前需加定冠词 'the'。

× To be honest, I feel quite stress when I have to work on something for a long time because it is require a lot of concentration and patience.

✓ To be honest, I feel quite stressed when I have to work on something for a long time because it requires a lot of concentration and patience.

'stress' 应为形容词 'stressed'，'it is require' 应为 'it requires'，主谓一致错误。

× For example, when I study for exam for several hours, I find it difficult to stay focus focused and.

✓ For example, when I study for an exam for several hours, I find it difficult to stay focused.

'focus' 应为形容词 'focused'，'for exam' 前应加不定冠词 'an'，句尾多余 'and'。

× Absolutely, just I mentioned before I worked in a primary school as an art teacher, I have to pay more attention to my students and especially patients and counter transient behaviors their class.

✓ Absolutely, as I mentioned before, when I worked in a primary school as an art teacher, I had to pay more attention to my students, especially their patience and counter transient behaviors in their class.

句子结构混乱，'patients' 应为 'patience'，'counter transient behaviors their class' 语序错误，应为 'counter transient behaviors in their class'。

× To be honest, I am more patient now before I was a child because back then I usually did whatever I want without thinking much.

✓ To be honest, I am more patient now than when I was a child because back then I usually did whatever I wanted without thinking much.

比较结构错误，应为 'more patient now than when I was a child'，'did whatever I want' 中 'want' 应为过去式 'wanted'。

× However, as an adult I have learned to control my emotions and wait calmly and have more response.

✓ However, as an adult I have learned to control my emotions, wait calmly, and respond more appropriately.

'have more response' 用法不当，应改为 'respond more appropriately'，使表达更自然。