耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复词汇，如“I think I think”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并适当使用连接词。

範例: I consider myself a patient person most of the time because I rarely get annoyed by small things. However, in some rare situations, I might feel impatient or angry.

建議: 表达时注意语法准确，如“others impolite”应为“others being impolite”。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并具体描述情境。

範例: I usually feel impatient when others are impolite, for example, when children move around and laugh loudly in a cinema. I believe it's important to maintain a quiet atmosphere there.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达感受，并避免无关内容。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, like difficult math exams, I often feel tired and bored. Sometimes, I find it hard to concentrate and solve problems effectively.

建議: 表达需更准确自然，避免语法错误，如“doing something about code both computer science”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, my job involves coding in computer science, which requires a lot of patience. We need to carefully check our code to ensure the program works well.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“have a good temperature”。建议用更准确的词汇表达情绪变化，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get impatient and angry when things went wrong, but now I can stay calm and handle situations better.

× Usually I'm patient person and I never get annoyed with others at small things, but sometimes I'll be impatient and angry.

✓ Usually I'm a patient person and I never get annoyed with others at small things, but sometimes I'll be impatient and angry.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“patient person”是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。

× I think it may come from others impolite, like for instance some children will move around and laugh at the cinema theater.

✓ I think it may come from others being impolite, like for instance some children moving around and laughing at the cinema theater.

“others impolite”结构不正确，应该用动名词形式“being impolite”来表达“别人不礼貌”。另外，后半句用动名词形式更自然。

× I think we should keep a quiet atmosphere.

✓ I think we should keep a quiet atmosphere.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I may get tired and bored like doing some hard math exams.

✓ I may get tired and bored doing some hard math exams.

“like doing”中“like”后面不需要“to”，直接用动名词形式“doing”即可。

× I really think the heart problems can cause me to. Stay blank in mind and have no good solutions.

✓ I really think the hard problems can cause me to stay blank in mind and have no good solutions.

原句中“heart problems”应为“hard problems”，且“to.”后面断句错误，应与后半句连成一句。

× Yes, I'm doing something about code both computer science.

✓ Yes, I'm doing something about coding in computer science.

“doing something about code both computer science”表达不清，应改为“doing something about coding in computer science”，使用介词“in”表示领域。

× This is a specific field that requires a lot of patience and we should check our code carefully and patiently to next program work very well.

✓ This is a specific field that requires a lot of patience and we should check our code carefully and patiently so that the next program works very well.

“to next program work very well”结构不正确，应使用连词“so that”引导目的状语从句，且“program”单数时谓语动词用“works”。

× Yes, when I was a child, I am very serious about nearly everything, so sometimes something went wrong.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was very serious about nearly everything, so sometimes when something went wrong.

时间状语“when I was a child”表示过去，谓语动词应使用过去时“was”，保持时态一致。

× But now I have a good temperature and I have a good temperature.

✓ But now I have a good temper.

“temperature”是“温度”的意思，表达“脾气好”应使用“temper”。