耐心— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
To be frank, I'm not a patient person. I'm easy to be straight and easy to angry with something I can't. I'm out of control. While my mother is a very patient person, she do everything and talk to me with.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
I would be crazy if I have been talked about the solution but the other side didn't follow my ideas and it was being trouble or something I out of control.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
It depends if the assignment given for me is too difficult to finish, maybe this period will be a black time. While if the assignment is interesting and have a creative part for me to brainstorming or is it meaningful, I will cherish this time.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
To be honest yes, because my job is full of document and reports need to be written and these kind of work full of description and data need to be checked and so I need to be patient about my job.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
To be frank, I don't think I have any chance I'm an impatient person at all. But when this time I will be not easy to lose temper because I know it is my duty to.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复和冗余。
範例: To be honest, I am not a very patient person. I often get frustrated when things don't go as planned. However, my mother is very patient and always helps me stay calm.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分數: 45.0建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用简单句表达原因，并用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: I feel impatient when I suggest a solution but others do not follow it. It makes me feel frustrated because the problem remains unsolved.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，避免词汇错误。
範例: It depends on the task. If the assignment is too difficult, I might feel stressed. However, if it is interesting and allows me to be creative, I enjoy the process.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分數: 55.0建議: 句子结构复杂但表达不清晰，存在语法错误。建议分句表达，注意名词复数和动词形式，提升表达的准确性。
範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. I have to write many documents and reports, which involve checking detailed data carefully.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分數: 50.0建議: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: Honestly, I have always been impatient. However, now I try not to lose my temper easily because I understand it is my responsibility.
文法
× While my mother is a very patient person, she do everything and talk to me with.
✓ While my mother is a very patient person, she does everything and talks to me with patience.
主语是第三人称单数（my mother），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式（does, talks）。原句中使用了复数形式do，导致主谓不一致。
× I would be crazy if I have been talked about the solution but the other side didn't follow my ideas and it was being trouble or something I out of control.
✓ I would be crazy if I had talked about the solution but the other side didn't follow my ideas and it was trouble or something I was out of control of.
条件句中虚拟语气应使用过去完成时（had talked），而不是现在完成时（have been talked）。另外，表达“我失控”应使用过去时态was out of control。
× While my mother is a very patient person, she do everything and talk to me with.
✓ While my mother is a very patient person, she does everything and talks to me patiently.
动词短语“talk to me with”后缺少合适的名词或副词，正确表达应为“talk to me patiently”，用副词修饰动词。
× I would be crazy if I have been talked about the solution but the other side didn't follow my ideas and it was being trouble or something I out of control.
✓ I would be crazy if I had talked about the solution but the other side didn't follow my ideas and it was trouble or something I was out of control of.
“something I out of control”缺少动词，且“out of control”应与主语连用，正确表达为“something I was out of control of”。
× I will cherish this time.
✓ I will cherish this time.
该句无语法错误，符合语法规范。
× But when this time I will be not easy to lose temper because I know it is my duty to.
✓ But now I will not easily lose my temper because I know it is my duty.
“when this time”表达不当，应改为“now”；“be not easy to lose temper”结构错误，应改为“will not easily lose my temper”；“my temper”需加物主代词。
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