耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

範例: No, I am not a patient person because I find it hard to wait for things. For example, when I want something to happen immediately, I get frustrated if it takes time. Therefore, I often struggle to stay calm in such situations.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific about what makes you impatient.

範例: I feel impatient when I want something quickly but it doesn't happen on time. For instance, if I am waiting for a response and it takes too long, I get frustrated because I prefer things to happen promptly.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific feelings or examples. Avoid vague words and improve sentence structure.

範例: I feel very frustrated and anxious when I have to do something for a long time. For example, waiting in long queues makes me impatient because I dislike wasting time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I have to interact with many customers. For this reason, being patient helps me handle different situations calmly and effectively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear comparison and support it with reasons or examples using linking words.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned from my experiences. For example, I used to get angry quickly, but now I try to stay calm and think before reacting.

× If I wanted something to happen now, then it has to be.

✓ If I want something to happen now, then it has to be.

The sentence uses 'wanted' which is past tense, but the context is present desire, so present tense 'want' is correct.

× I can't wait for it, or I can be patient at all.

✓ I can't wait for it, nor can I be patient at all.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used here; 'nor' is appropriate to connect two negative clauses.

× It's such a bad habit, right? But.

✓ It's such a bad habit, right? But I am working on it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'But' which is incomplete; it needs a following clause to complete the thought.

× if something is coming up to me, then somebody will sit and be patient.

✓ if something is coming up for me, then somebody will sit and be patient.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'coming up for me' is the correct phrase to indicate something approaching or happening to the speaker.

× I'm so impatient person you.

✓ I'm such an impatient person, you know.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and article usage; 'such an impatient person' is correct and 'you know' is a common tag phrase.

× Absolutely. It was so frustrated and insecure about the things which you have to do long time and I do have a lot of experience of this kind of things too.

✓ Absolutely. I feel so frustrated and insecure about the things which you have to do for a long time and I have a lot of experience with these kinds of things too.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and 'have to do long time'; present tense and correct prepositions are needed to match the context.

× So I hate waiting things long times.

✓ So I hate waiting for things for a long time.

The verb 'waiting' requires the preposition 'for' and 'long times' should be 'a long time'.

× Definitely in in my country there are a lot of office or jobs where people should be feel patient and should have the capacity of being patient because you have to deal with every customer, every people.

✓ Definitely, in my country there are a lot of offices or jobs where people should feel patient and should have the capacity to be patient because you have to deal with every customer, every person.

The sentence has redundant 'in in', incorrect verb form 'be feel', and incorrect plural 'every people' which should be 'every person'.

× I think yes, I was really stopped wrong and impatient when I was a child.

✓ I think yes, I was really stubborn and impatient when I was a child.

The phrase 'stopped wrong' is incorrect; likely the intended adjective is 'stubborn'.

× But you know who knows about being patient in their small ages.

✓ But you know, who knows about being patient at a young age.

The phrase 'in their small ages' is incorrect; 'at a young age' is the correct expression.

× So yeah, it has changed a lot now. I have learned so many lesson.

✓ So yeah, it has changed a lot now. I have learned so many lessons.

The noun 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' when preceded by 'many'.