耐心— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Now I'm an impatient person because I always get frustrated with my friends when I teach math problems and after conservations they always say that I get annoyed easily.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Actually, there are many situations that make me impatient, for example when I am waiting for a long queue or stuck in heavy traffic. I often feel frustrated because it wastes my time.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
What I have to do something for a long time? I usually try to stay calm and keep my patience by focusing on one task, but if the task is very challenging, I might lose my temper a little bit.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Yes, I definitely need to be patient when I communicate with my friend or teachers because they explain things very slowly or ask many questions. For example, a teacher is teaching a difficult topic, I need to concentrate.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I'm definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I've lost my temper, especially in the mornings after I woke up, which sometimes caused frustration with my family. However, I have learned to control my emotions better, especially in difficult situations, and that's helped me become more calm and understanding.
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文法
× Now I'm an impatient person because I always get frustrated with my friends when I teach math problems and after conservations they always say that I get annoyed easily.
✓ Now I'm an impatient person because I always get frustrated with my friends when I teach math problems and after conversations they always say that I get annoyed easily.
这里“conservations”拼写错误，正确应为“conversations”。虽然不是语法错误，但属于词汇拼写错误，需注意拼写准确。
× Actually, there are many situations that make me impatient, for example when I am waiting for a long queue or stuck in heavy traffic.
✓ Actually, there are many situations that make me impatient, for example when I am waiting in a long queue or stuck in heavy traffic.
英语中“wait”后面通常接介词“in”表示“排队等待”，所以应为“waiting in a long queue”。
× What I have to do something for a long time?
✓ Do I have to do something for a long time?
该句为疑问句，语序错误。正确疑问句应为“Do I have to do something for a long time?”，即助动词+主语+动词原形。
× Yes, I definitely need to be patient when I communicate with my friend or teachers because they explain things very slowly or ask many questions.
✓ Yes, I definitely need to be patient when I communicate with my friends or teachers because they explain things very slowly or ask many questions.
“friend”前缺少复数形式，应为“friends”，因为后面提到了“teachers”，表示多个对象。
× When I was younger, I've lost my temper, especially in the mornings after I woke up, which sometimes caused frustration with my family.
✓ When I was younger, I lost my temper, especially in the mornings after I woke up, which sometimes caused frustration with my family.
此处应使用一般过去时“lost”，而非现在完成时“have lost”，因为描述的是过去的习惯或状态。
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