耐心— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
No, not really, because if I get angry, I can't forgive a person very quickly and I have a feeling that they continue and make it again and again, so I I can't be patient.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Uh, when someone lies to me and when they treated me so bad, that broke my heart and I feel very impatient and angry about that and so yeah.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Sometimes I feel getting more tired because it's umm, it's normal when you have when you have to do something for a long time, it's it's normal to get a feeling of tiredness and.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Uh, at this moment I don't have any job, but for the future, I plan to become a teacher. And of course it will require for me to be patient because I will have, I mean, I, I need to meet.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes I think so because when I was a child it's hard for me to accept something but now I'm adult so I can take more responsibilities and see what is good and not good for me and patient is bigger things.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分數: 65.0建議: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain briefly why you find it hard to be patient. Avoid repeating ideas and filler words.
範例: No, I am not a patient person because when I get angry, I find it hard to forgive quickly. I feel that the person might repeat the mistake, which makes me less patient.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分數: 60.0建議: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so yeah'.
範例: I feel impatient when someone lies to me or treats me badly because it breaks my trust and makes me angry.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分數: 55.0建議: Provide a clear and complete answer without hesitation or repetition. Use linking words to explain your feelings logically and avoid incomplete sentences.
範例: I usually feel tired when I have to do something for a long time because continuous effort can be exhausting.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分數: 50.0建議: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Explain why your future job will require patience with specific details.
範例: I don't have a job now, but I plan to become a teacher in the future. This job will require patience because I will need to help students learn and handle different situations calmly.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分數: 60.0建議: Make your answer clearer and more organized. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how maturity has increased your patience.
範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as an adult, I can take more responsibilities and better understand what is good or bad for me, which helps me be more patient.
文法
× when they treated me so bad
✓ when they treated me so badly
The word 'bad' is an adjective, but here it should be an adverb modifying the verb 'treated'. The correct adverb form is 'badly'.
× and patient is bigger things
✓ and patience is a bigger thing
The word 'patient' is an adjective or noun meaning a person receiving medical care, but here the intended meaning is the noun 'patience'. Also, 'bigger things' is plural and vague; it should be 'a bigger thing' to refer to the concept of patience as a singular abstract noun.
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