耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to be more concise and clear, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, explain your technique more clearly with proper linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Actually, no, I am not a very patient person. I tend to get upset over small things. However, recently I have been trying to calm myself by using a technique I learned from a YouTube video, where I count backwards from 10 to 1 to control my anger.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to express your feelings more naturally.

範例: I feel impatient when people tease me or make jokes about me. For example, if someone cracks a joke at my expense, I tend to think about it for several days, which makes me feel more impatient.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Try to make your sentences more natural and avoid repetition. Also, provide clearer examples to support your points.

範例: I usually feel frustrated when I have to do something for a long time. However, if the task is related to my interests, like accounting, I enjoy it. On the other hand, writing long essays makes me feel impatient and stressed.

建議: Your answer is on topic but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points.

範例: Yes, my job in customer service requires a lot of patience. I have to remain calm and patient when dealing with rude or angry customers. Often, customers get upset quickly, so I need to think carefully before responding.

建議: Your answer shows improvement but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear expressions. Try to use proper tenses and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how your patience has improved.

範例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Working in customer service has helped me become more patient because I deal with different customers and their problems regularly. In contrast, as a child, I used to get upset over small things easily.

× I often get affected by the little things and that very aggressively.

✓ I often get affected by the little things and react very aggressively.

The phrase 'and that very aggressively' is incomplete and unclear. It should be corrected to 'and react very aggressively' to properly express the action in present participle form.

× But nowadays I'm running the patient by calming myself down.

✓ But nowadays I'm practicing patience by calming myself down.

The phrase 'running the patient' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'practicing patience'. Also, 'the patient' is incorrect here as 'patience' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'the'.

× I have a new technique from watching a video on the YouTube that we should count from 12:50 like 1098.

✓ I have a new technique from watching a video on YouTube that we should count down from 12 to 1 like 10 9 8.

'the YouTube' is incorrect; 'YouTube' does not require 'the'. Also, 'count from 12:50 like 1098' is unclear and corrected to 'count down from 12 to 1 like 10 9 8' for clarity.

× We should do our worst counting to control our ankles and.

✓ We should do our worst counting to control our anger.

The phrase 'control our ankles' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be 'control our anger' to make sense in context.

× I think I got affected by a little things like, uh, if somebody teased me, I will not be able to take that as a job.

✓ I think I get affected by little things like, uh, if somebody teases me, I will not be able to take that as a joke.

'a little things' is incorrect; 'little things' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, 'got affected' should be 'get affected' to match present tense. 'teased' should be 'teases' for third person singular. 'job' is likely a mispronunciation of 'joke'.

× They often think a lot about the small situations.

✓ I often think a lot about small situations.

'They' is incorrect as the speaker is referring to themselves. Also, 'the small situations' is incorrect; 'small situations' without 'the' is appropriate here.

× If somebody cracks a joke about me, that will definitely be in my mind for almost 4 days or maybe a week.

✓ If somebody cracks a joke about me, it will definitely stay in my mind for almost 4 days or maybe a week.

'that will definitely be in my mind' is awkward; 'it will definitely stay in my mind' is clearer and more natural.

× I will not able to get rid of that feeling earlier.

✓ I will not be able to get rid of that feeling quickly.

Missing auxiliary verb 'be' after 'will not'. Also, 'earlier' is incorrect here; 'quickly' or 'soon' is more appropriate.

× So I think this thing keeps me more, make me feel more impatient.

✓ So I think this thing makes me feel more impatient.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction and verb form. 'keeps me more, make me feel more' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel more impatient'.

× At that time I mostly feel frustrated, but if the task is related to my interest or my hobby, at that time I felt very great.

✓ At that time I mostly feel frustrated, but if the task is related to my interest or my hobby, I feel very good.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'felt very great' should be 'feel very good' to maintain present tense consistency.

× For instance, if I have to do all accounting for a long time, I definitely enjoy that.

✓ For instance, if I have to do all the accounting for a long time, I definitely enjoy it.

'all accounting' should be 'all the accounting' to specify the task. Also, 'enjoy that' is better as 'enjoy it' for naturalness.

× And on the other hand, if I have to write a long essay or a theory for theory at that moment that very frustrated and impatient.

✓ And on the other hand, if I have to write a long essay or theory, at that moment I feel very frustrated and impatient.

'a theory for theory' is unclear and likely incorrect. Also, missing subject and verb in 'that very frustrated and impatient' corrected to 'I feel very frustrated and impatient'.

× Actually I work in a customer service so patient is a key while working in that I have to keep myself myself patient while dealing with the rude or angry customer.

✓ Actually, I work in customer service, so patience is key while working there. I have to keep myself patient while dealing with rude or angry customers.

'a customer service' should be 'customer service' without article. 'patient is a key' should be 'patience is key'. Repetition of 'myself' removed. 'the rude or angry customer' should be plural 'rude or angry customers'.

× Most of the time customer get angry just by your once and friends so you have to think properly before speaking.

✓ Most of the time customers get angry just by your tone and words, so you have to think properly before speaking.

'customer' should be plural 'customers'. 'once and friends' is unclear, likely misheard; corrected to 'tone and words' for meaning. Added comma before 'so'.

× Definitely, Yeah, yes, after working in the customer services, I become more, more patient.

✓ Definitely, yeah, yes, after working in customer service, I have become more patient.

'customer services' should be 'customer service' (uncountable). 'I become' should be 'I have become' to indicate change over time.

× But when I was a child, the patient is moving, I often get depressed by a small things as I mentioned earlier.

✓ But when I was a child, my patience was lacking; I often got depressed by small things as I mentioned earlier.

'the patient is moving' is incorrect; likely meant 'my patience was lacking'. 'a small things' is incorrect; 'small things' is plural and does not take 'a'. Also, tense adjusted for past.

× But now dealing with different customer, different types of the people listening, their hesitation, you know or problems, I get more patient.

✓ But now, dealing with different customers, different types of people, listening to their hesitation or problems, I have become more patient.

'customer' should be plural 'customers'. 'different types of the people' should be 'different types of people' without 'the'. Added missing preposition 'listening to'. Tense adjusted to present perfect for change over time.